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Pray, tell me,
What time is it now?
Asked the Sun,
With a mild yawn,
Is it the moment of dawn?
It's 4 o' clock Sir,
Replied the Moon,
Sadly aware,
He had to depart soon.
Aah, am not too late today,
Even though it's Sunday,
The Sun said with eyes shut,
I wish I had slept a bit more, but ...
Last night's party had taken its toll,
Drinks and more drinks, energized his soul,
Drowsiness grasped him soon after,
He would have taken a leave, had he got a work partner.
The Moon heard the Sun's thought,
He could get overtime point, if he managed the plot,
You don't worry Sir, sleep some more,
I will work extra, and guard the door.
The Sun slipped back in its peaceful retreat,
The Moon stood its ground, with determination and grit.
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The sky still dark,
Not in sight a flying lark,
The Moon standing before the Sun,
Working his heart out, proud of what he had done,
The Sun was happy, a pact they did fix,
That marked the beginning of the Solar Eclipse.
This Poem is shared with Creative Every Day and the Prompt is Time.
Great fun, this - and if you wish to take it so, could all be read as metaphor.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dave :-)
DeleteGreat metaphors! I like thim poem!
ReplyDeleteDo you want follow each other?
Den.
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Sure Denis, that would be great :-)
Deletewhat a cute poetry that makes the understanding of the solar eclipse so easy!
ReplyDeleteThey should introduce this in school! :P
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Ha ha ... well said :-P
Deletedelightful and magical poem ~ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteVery clever conversation between Sun and Moon! And the 'solar eclipse' ending made me smile!
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteReally, this explaination of solar eclipse is really fascinating and creative.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ash :-)
DeleteVery creative and clever -- a perfect poem for the CED theme, time!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gina :-)
Delete:) Fun piece
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletereally amazing and fun filled....great!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
Deletewow...amazing counting and poetry.
ReplyDeleteAMAZING!!! I am speechless.. I'm marveling over the inner workings of your mind.. who could ever write something this brilliant?? as you?
ReplyDeleteThough I don't deserve such high praises, thanks for such beautiful words Crystal :-)
DeleteVery clever. Wish I could sleep in some days! :)
ReplyDeleteWe all love to sleep :-)
DeleteA lovely tale that could easily be made into a children's legend!
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie :-)
Deletesuccha a cute poem...the solar eclipse ending amazed me!!:D
ReplyDeleteThank You Shikha :-)
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