Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Island



Weary ambition,
Traversing across island,
Finding its way out.

Island of rainbow,
Painting the river, VIBGYOR,
Caressing the shore.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Island.




36 comments:

  1. really enjoyed the first one. :)

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  2. I liked Vibgyor.. its interesting.... shows each colour..

    RS:)

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  3. Tricky... fitting all those colors within the syllable count! I like to imagine the painted river.

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  4. I like the idea of rainbow caressing the shore! :)

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  5. What a wonderful place to be. Good one. Thx for sharing.

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  6. A very tranquil and colourful haiku. Would love to be there. :-)

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  7. ...Island of rainbow ~ great visual ~ serene haiku ~ lovely ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  8. Ohh the joy of finding an ambition. Lo & behold~ beautifully carved :)

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  9. I love ALL the colours of the rainbow in the second one.
    :)

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  10. Liked the idea of ''Weary ambition''

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  11. Island of rainbow..I can see the colors in your haiku...nice!!

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  12. Second haiku is my favorit...
    Nice thought..

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/island-express.html

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  13. Really like your personification of the river, and the acronym also works well. Very nice!

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  14. This is nice. There is nothing like the beauty of an island shoreline.

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  15. Beautiful. "Finding" and "caressing", very lovely.

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  16. Very nice... the purpose of the island is its shore

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  17. I really like "caressing the shore"!

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  18. beautiful :) and I liked the second part the most :D

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