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Birth and Creation,
A mystery forever,
Can Big Bang explain?
Sun takes birth at dawn,
Birds chirp away pleased, amused,
Dancing clouds merry.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Birth.
The theory of Big Bang, cool! Nice haiku
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya :-)
DeleteTwo different slants, both nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteThere seems like movements in heaven around this, a cosmic explosion and the slow moving clouds. Nicely Green!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteAwesome it is
ReplyDelete"Dancing clouds merry"..wow..what an image!!
ReplyDeleteSuperb:D
A mystery "forever", do you think we'll never know...?
ReplyDeleteThe Big Bang theory, man trying to explain the incomprehensible here, as a 3 year-old kid trying to understand how his dad can repair his electric toy.
Let's enjoy what God has given to us, so well expressed in your second haiku, not questioning the whys or hows.
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We should enjoy God's gifts ... very well said :-)
DeleteSun takes birth at dawn.. I love this image
ReplyDeleteThe everlasting discussion on 'how was Earth born' ... good job. Loved reading this one.
ReplyDeleteIt is a mystery to be enjoyed...loved it
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteI think maybe if we discover, or re-create the big bang, it may also bring about our death. Who knows, I just enjoy what is..life :)
ReplyDeleteLovely
Thank You Bren :-)
DeleteFrom the big bang to a single dawn in six lines! Wow! I love it when the "dancing clouds(are) merry."
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteI like merry dancing clouds ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteThe sun, birds, clouds, Big Bang, you've covered them all :)
ReplyDeleteI tried to :-)
DeleteCertainly Birth and Creation is as mysterious as death.
ReplyDelete"Sun takes birth at dawn"
ReplyDeleteNice haiku.
Thanks Anjali :-)
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ReplyDeletePassei para uma visitinha.
Bom fim de semana!
Beijinhos.
Brasil
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Thanks for visiting Ines :-)
DeleteLoved both haiku! First one is thoughtful...Second one is so pleasant to read :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteBoth are good, but I love the second of these.
ReplyDeleteThank You Patti :-)
DeleteAwesome site. I'm going to follow it.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kathydobbs :-)
DeleteFirst one- Remarkable question...
ReplyDeleteSecond- Beautifully said :)
Thanks Simran :-)
DeleteYes! Birth and creation a big bang followed by a bang
ReplyDeleteI think some things will remain a mystery until the end of time! Have a good Sunday, GS. I always enjoy your blog.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Mary :-)
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