Saturday, September 22, 2012

Birth



Birth and Creation,
A mystery forever,
Can Big Bang explain?

Sun takes birth at dawn,
Birds chirp away pleased, amused,
Dancing clouds merry.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Birth.




44 comments:

  1. The theory of Big Bang, cool! Nice haiku

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  2. Two different slants, both nicely done.

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  3. There seems like movements in heaven around this, a cosmic explosion and the slow moving clouds. Nicely Green!

    Hank

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  4. "Dancing clouds merry"..wow..what an image!!
    Superb:D

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  5. A mystery "forever", do you think we'll never know...?
    The Big Bang theory, man trying to explain the incomprehensible here, as a 3 year-old kid trying to understand how his dad can repair his electric toy.
    Let's enjoy what God has given to us, so well expressed in your second haiku, not questioning the whys or hows.
    :)

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    1. We should enjoy God's gifts ... very well said :-)

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  6. Sun takes birth at dawn.. I love this image

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  7. The everlasting discussion on 'how was Earth born' ... good job. Loved reading this one.

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  8. It is a mystery to be enjoyed...loved it

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  9. I think maybe if we discover, or re-create the big bang, it may also bring about our death. Who knows, I just enjoy what is..life :)
    Lovely

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  10. From the big bang to a single dawn in six lines! Wow! I love it when the "dancing clouds(are) merry."

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  11. I like merry dancing clouds ~

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  12. The sun, birds, clouds, Big Bang, you've covered them all :)

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  13. Certainly Birth and Creation is as mysterious as death.

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  14. "Sun takes birth at dawn"

    Nice haiku.

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  15. º°♫♪º°
    Passei para uma visitinha.
    Bom fim de semana!
    Beijinhos.
    Brasil
    ♫♪♪¸.•°`❤彡

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  16. Loved both haiku! First one is thoughtful...Second one is so pleasant to read :)

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  17. Both are good, but I love the second of these.

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  18. Awesome site. I'm going to follow it.

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  19. First one- Remarkable question...
    Second- Beautifully said :)

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  20. Yes! Birth and creation a big bang followed by a bang

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  21. I think some things will remain a mystery until the end of time! Have a good Sunday, GS. I always enjoy your blog.

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