Friday, September 28, 2012

Waterfall

(Image Source: http://mi9.com)


The stars rain tonight,
Angels clap in sheer delight,
Waterfall of light.

Purity defined,
As I stand under this fall,
Water, kiss my soul.


This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Waterfall.




24 comments:

  1. Every time I read one of your haiku it gets me introduced to something lovely. :)

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  2. Awesome set of haiku Green Speck ... I am glad that you've found the way to my new daily haiku meme Carpe Diem. You're the first ever that has contributed a haiku for Carpe Diem. Thank you so much. I hope to see you again here ... and that more Haijin (haiku poets) will find their way to Carpe Diem.

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    1. Thank You Kristjaan ... I love your blog, and hope to be a regular in your haiku fest :-)

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  3. oh what beautiful words... I'm not surprised. Always, I am amazed by your work!

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  4. Wonderful set of haiku ~ 'water kiss my soul' ~ delightful and mystical ~ (A Creative Harbor)

    thanks for coming by and commenting ^_^

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  5. The glee of angels, the speckled fall of light, and the embracing pleasure. Lovely words, Amrit.

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  6. That is a lovely image but, not as lovely as your words.

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  7. Aww..this looks so calm n serene. I love the picture and the haiku goes well with it.

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  8. Wonderful images drawn with words. I love the final line especially.
    I have a small suggestion, though. Of course, it is only a suggestion as you are the author of these amazing haiku. As haiku is not rhyming poetic form, you may shuffle the wording somehow, so as to lose the rhyme and keep the imagery. But, it is your calling.
    Best, MK.

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    1. Thanks Mariya. I will keep your suggestion in mind going forward. Do keep visiting :-)

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  9. witty metaphor of waterfall of light.
    ;)

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