Strangers

I wrote another piece in Hindi today, and tried converting into English. Though I personally like the Hindi version more, I feel there are lots of rooms for improvement in both. Let me know your suggestions :-)

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बिखरी निगाहें - Scattered Gazes

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बिखरी  निगाहें 

ख्वाब  में डूबी 

कलम की स्याही से 

ली है करवटें मैंने

दर्द भरे  इन घावों को 

हैं आज उड़ने की ख्वाइश 

काश होते पंख मेरे भी 

पूरी  करता मैं तेरी सारी  फरमाइश

This is my first attempt in writing a Hindi poem. Thank You Meenakshi for helping me out with this :-)

 The English translation is as follows:

scattered gazes

immersed in thoughts

scribbling fate

I turn around

wounds hurt

they wish to fly

I long for wings

to fulfill all your dreams

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