Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Rain



Refreshing wine drops,
The Lord's glass overflowing,
Fermenting dry soul.

Tears burning the sand,
A gateway for rejection,
Come rain, soothe my nerves.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Rain.

58 comments:

  1. Very touching!!! Loved the intense emotions...

    Virgin happiness!

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  2. I like how you compare rain with wine...

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  3. Love it..now I know why I get lost in rain..

    RS:)

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  4. Come rain soothe my nerves had me drenched! lovely!

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  5. Very refreshing take...liked it

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  6. Ohhh! I loved these! lots to think about.

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  7. Refreshing haiku ... lovely take on rain.

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  8. Nice emotions in this. Great writing!

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  9. fermenting.. love the emotion and the feel of this

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  10. I like the imagery in the first take. Beautifully written.

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  11. Yes, wine is a buenreconfortante of souls, and goes well also nerves.

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  12. Rain is so cleansing isn't it :) Clean rain that is :)

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  13. Your haiku are "refreshing" today. I particularly like the second as I can relate to it from experiences.

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  14. First one is my favorite for sure.

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  15. The Lord's glass overflowing.. OH AMRIT! It was beautiful.. very beautiful. And then comes a rainbow.. :)

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  16. Precious pair!
    My favourite line The Lord's glass overflowing.
    :)

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  17. Oh, I love rain! This is so lovely! :))

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  18. very nice, lovely, peaceful and sensual! Great take on the prompt!

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  19. Very lovely and full of beautiful imagery. Well done

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  20. I like the way you invite the rain to come...

    Seven Rains

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  21. Yeah... Rain is alwys soothing...

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html

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  22. Loved both haiku.....second one was touching!!

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  23. You wrote such powerful Haiku. I love both but the second one appeal to me more.
    Great job!!Mine is here
    Have you a FANTABULOUS WEEK!!!
    hugs
    shakira

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  24. Nice and different take on the prompt!:)

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  25. Oooh, the first one may be my favorite of yours yet. Nicely created.

    September Heights - Skies' Joy

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