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Refreshing wine drops,
The Lord's glass overflowing,
Fermenting dry soul.
Tears burning the sand,
A gateway for rejection,
Come rain, soothe my nerves.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Rain.
Very touching!!! Loved the intense emotions...
ReplyDeleteVirgin happiness!
Thank You Pranita :-)
DeleteI like how you compare rain with wine...
ReplyDeleteThank You Tarun :-)
DeleteLove it..now I know why I get lost in rain..
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thanks Sir :-)
DeleteCome rain soothe my nerves had me drenched! lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank You Maharukh :-)
DeleteVery refreshing take...liked it
ReplyDeleteOhhh! I loved these! lots to think about.
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteRefreshing haiku ... lovely take on rain.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kristjaan :-)
DeleteNice emotions in this. Great writing!
ReplyDeletefermenting.. love the emotion and the feel of this
ReplyDeleteThank You Unfetteredbs :-)
DeleteI like the imagery in the first take. Beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leo :-)
DeleteYes, wine is a buenreconfortante of souls, and goes well also nerves.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
DeleteRain is so cleansing isn't it :) Clean rain that is :)
ReplyDeleteYou are right :-)
DeleteYour haiku are "refreshing" today. I particularly like the second as I can relate to it from experiences.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee :-)
DeleteBring on the rain, for sure!
ReplyDeleteThank You Sandy :-)
DeleteFirst one is my favorite for sure.
ReplyDeleteThe Lord's glass overflowing.. OH AMRIT! It was beautiful.. very beautiful. And then comes a rainbow.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Crystal :-)
DeleteRain is a soother, no :)?
ReplyDeleteYup :-)
DeletePrecious pair!
ReplyDeleteMy favourite line The Lord's glass overflowing.
:)
Thanks Dulcina :-)
Deleteyou are a master of haiku....:-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteOh, I love rain! This is so lovely! :))
ReplyDeleteThanks Fida :-)
Deletevery nice, lovely, peaceful and sensual! Great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThank You Mariya :-)
DeleteVery lovely and full of beautiful imagery. Well done
ReplyDeleteI like the way you invite the rain to come...
ReplyDeleteSeven Rains
Yeah... Rain is alwys soothing...
ReplyDeletehttp://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/and-i-fell-in-love.html
Yes ... it is :-)
DeleteLoved both haiku.....second one was touching!!
ReplyDeleteYou wrote such powerful Haiku. I love both but the second one appeal to me more.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!!Mine is here
Have you a FANTABULOUS WEEK!!!
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shakira
Thank You Shakira :-)
DeleteNice and different take on the prompt!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang :-)
DeleteOooh, the first one may be my favorite of yours yet. Nicely created.
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Skies' Joy
Thanks Becca :-)
DeleteExcellent - as always. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Stephen :-)
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