Monday, September 03, 2012

Loneliness

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Silent murmurs play,
Navigate, meandering sea,
Eyes speaking sorrow.

Loneliness hugs tight,
Memories interwoven,
Silken fingers wave.

Dawn and dusk, puzzled,
Valley crumbles, an earthquake?
Heart beating, aloof.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Loneliness.





48 comments:

  1. I like the silent murmurs ~

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  2. Very atmospheric I feel - I like the third verse best.

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  3. you have really captured an eerie quality of loneliness greenie.

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  4. The second one..straight to heart.

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  5. I like all of this set very much. One of my favourite lines is "heart beating, aloof"

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  6. Love the ghostly feel here and the symbolism of losing conscious sight of morning and night.

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  7. Amazing!! You had me at 'silent murmurs play' and didn't let go until 'heat beating aloof.' Well done!

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  8. i can feel what it says :)

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  9. You capture the feeling perfectly.

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  10. 'Loneliness hugs tight' - that is so true. I have felt it.

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  11. This is perfect description of loneliness....Beautiful poem.....

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  12. Loneliness hugs tight...
    Beautiful!!!

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  13. Beautiful....i liked the second stanza.....so good....

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  14. The loneliness in this poem is palpable! Nice write!

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  15. "dawn and dusk, puzzles,
    valley crumbles,an earthquake?"

    those were lovely lines..my vision was a lonely warrior walking down to earth's end after defeat...and u painted it vibrant

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  16. for sure you have penned it so nicely..

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  17. To whom do those silken fingers belong, I wonder...

    A Long Loneliness

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  18. Lovely words...I liked "Silent murmurs play" & "Loneliness hugs tight"

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  19. amazingly captured and sooo well defined nothing more better than a writer evoking thoughts and urging with words to think!!!

    well done!

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  20. I like "silence murmurs" -- loneliness does not make a loud cry!! Thank you for visiting.

    September Heights - Vanished Spring

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  21. This made me cry for... joy? ... despair? ... I really don't know ... or maybe I do know, because you looked right into my heart ... Love, cat.

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