Tuesday, September 11, 2012


Do you hear the E-C-H-O
Of the days gone by
The meaningless rambling of the brook
As waves hit the rocky shore.

Do you feel the E-C-H-O
The Heavenly departure conceives
When the Earth lied still in the womb
The Milky Way burning in labor pain.

Do you see the E-C-H-O
Boundaries blurred undefined
Embracing us in a love too deep
Never realized 'twas that shallow.

Do you talk to the E-C-H-O
Futile though it may seem, it still serves
A purpose, unifying the voices in your head
Pay attention, they speak out loud.

This Poem is shared with One Single Impression and the Prompt is Echo.


  1. Oh this was beautiful.. especially the last four lines. Thank you for sharing another wonderful poem with us Amrit!

  2. Very nice! Your words 'echo' my thoughts. Smiles!

  3. Wonderful again ~ there is always an 'echo' ~ (A Creative Harbor)

  4. Ahh wow...this is beautiful imagination.....Lovely poem!

  5. Well done! I really like the last stanza.

  6. Oh, echo is felt by all senses, deeply! Thanks.