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Dreamy paper boats,
Paddling across streams of hope,
Moon, my estranged guide.
Sleep so elusive,
Foot marks across lonesome hearts,
Deceptive nightmares.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Sleep.
I like the first one a LOT!!! :) I can picture it...
ReplyDeleteVery interesting...I am always fascinated by Moon and Paperboats..and you have brought them together..lovely..thanks.. RS:)
ReplyDeleteI am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/no-sleep-in-her-eyes.html
I like the dreamy paper boats ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteYes, the moon seems to have to do with nightmares.
ReplyDeleteInspired haiku :)
Thanks Tiger :-)
Delete"Foot marks across lonesome hearts," love that part most :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Zenserly :-)
DeleteLovely imagery
ReplyDeleteThanks Vivinfrance :-)
DeleteMy goodness, you are so good at this writing thing....your words paint lovely and unique scenes.....
ReplyDeleteThank You Joanne :-)
DeleteLovely imagery you paint here with your words. The first haiku could be used for the prompt paper boats later on in September Heights.
ReplyDeletePaddling across streams of hope
ReplyDeleteBeen following your recent postings. They are beautiful. You have a way with words in a most elegant way. Great Green! Fascinating!
Hank
Thank You Hank :-)
Deletedreamy paper boats is such a gorgeous image!
ReplyDeleteLovely images in both. I especially was drawn to the "dreamy paper boats paddling across streams of hope! " wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThese are lovely images - the first is my favourite with "Paddling across streams of hope," very special.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteI defiinitely can identify.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteSuch lovely imagery in these. I really enjoyed both of them.
ReplyDeleteThank You Patti :-)
DeleteThese are great. You have touched my heart.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy :-)
Deletetwo different shades of dreams beautifully described....Lovely set!
ReplyDeleteThank You Valli :-)
DeleteI just wrote a haiku (for later) which has elements of your footprints! Your haiku are elegant.
ReplyDeleteWaiting for your haiku Judith :-)
DeleteNice choice of words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ajeya :-)
DeleteI too liked the dreamy paper boats...lovely
ReplyDeleteThank You Odyzz :-)
DeleteThank You Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteSo much here! I particularly liked "Foot marks across lonely hearts."
ReplyDeleteBoth are great, but I love the first one so.
ReplyDeletelike the dreamy quality of the first one, and the sadness in the second.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the Follow :) I feel honoured.
I really love the paper-boat voyage!!
ReplyDeleteWell done once again:D
Thanks Sayantini :-)
DeleteBeautiful images in both.
ReplyDeleteThe second line of each, my favourites.
Paperboats tomorrow!
:)
I wonder if a nightmare could be anything but deceptive...
ReplyDeleteSleep Behind Barred Windows
I wonder too :-)
DeleteThanks Stephen :-)
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