Sunday, September 02, 2012

Color

                                                    (Image Source: http://gallery.hd.org)


Seven sins unite,
Rainbow dances on my lap,
Glowing through the prism.

Evokes nakedness,
Unmasking colors of life,
Black and white, defined.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Color.




54 comments:

  1. Your set has left me thinking... good work..

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  2. Wow!!! Love this haiku immensely! Lovely structuring of words! :)

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  3. How can you come up with stuffs like these?
    It's incredible!!!

    ❤Not Just My Allegories❤

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    1. Thanks Anisha ... I am glad you liked it :-)

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  4. I liked that "Black and White"...

    RS:)

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  5. Nice thoughts on rainbow colors ~

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  6. 'Black and white , defined.' Loved that, especially.

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  7. This prism of thoughts is delightful! Especially love the power of:
    "Unmasking colors of life,"

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  8. "Rainbow dances on my lap," I particularly like this line. Such a colourful image. Very nice thoughts. Well done.

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  9. WOW! This is stunning ... leaves me in awe and ... speechless.

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  10. If seven sins unite, do we humans stand a chance?

    The Color of Fire

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    1. Humans are comprised of these sins too :-)

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  11. unmasking colors of life -- love the vividness of your words.

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  12. Excellent response to the prompt. What a great poem.

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  13. that's really the power of colors

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  14. I like the way you have handled this prompt.

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  15. shades of sins.. loved "seven sins unite"
    this had its own crisp and edge to it... amazing work dude!!

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  16. I really like the use of the prism

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  17. Perfect hakiu..i liked the second one ..:)
    Good work !!

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  18. Powerful imagination!

    'Seven sins unite' Liked :)

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  19. this is a provocative set. The first line really gives it impact.

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  20. Seven sins unite...drew me right in to your prism of color. Very thought-provoking. I like it.

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  21. That's the beauty of a prism! It seems sterile by itself! But once unmasked it's exactly as you've described it! Nicely written Green!

    Hank

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  22. I like it so much GS!

    Someone is Special

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  23. that was so innovative and fresh,
    when will I attempt haiku...:(

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