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Seven sins unite,
Rainbow dances on my lap,
Glowing through the prism.
Evokes nakedness,
Unmasking colors of life,
Black and white, defined.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Color.
Seven sins unite,
Rainbow dances on my lap,
Glowing through the prism.
Evokes nakedness,
Unmasking colors of life,
Black and white, defined.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Color.
Your set has left me thinking... good work..
ReplyDeleteThank You Tarun :-)
Deleteyes....that is nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandra :-)
DeleteWow!!! Love this haiku immensely! Lovely structuring of words! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pranita :-)
DeleteHow can you come up with stuffs like these?
ReplyDeleteIt's incredible!!!
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Thanks Anisha ... I am glad you liked it :-)
DeleteI liked that "Black and White"...
ReplyDeleteRS:)
Thanks Sir :-)
DeleteNice thoughts on rainbow colors ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
Delete'Black and white , defined.' Loved that, especially.
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteBeautifully colorful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
DeleteThis prism of thoughts is delightful! Especially love the power of:
ReplyDelete"Unmasking colors of life,"
Thanks Gemma :-)
Delete"Rainbow dances on my lap," I particularly like this line. Such a colourful image. Very nice thoughts. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteWOW! This is stunning ... leaves me in awe and ... speechless.
ReplyDeleteThanks Chèvrefeuille :-)
DeleteIf seven sins unite, do we humans stand a chance?
ReplyDeleteThe Color of Fire
Humans are comprised of these sins too :-)
Deleteunmasking colors of life -- love the vividness of your words.
ReplyDeleteThanks unfetteredbs :-)
DeleteExcellent response to the prompt. What a great poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sandy :-)
Deletethat's really the power of colors
ReplyDeleteThanks Kulapitot :-)
DeleteI like the way you have handled this prompt.
ReplyDeleteThank You Dave :-)
Deleteshades of sins.. loved "seven sins unite"
ReplyDeletethis had its own crisp and edge to it... amazing work dude!!
Thanks Maharukh :-)
DeleteI really like the use of the prism
ReplyDeleteThank You Bruce :-)
DeletePerfect hakiu..i liked the second one ..:)
ReplyDeleteGood work !!
Thanks Anu :-)
DeletePowerful imagination!
ReplyDelete'Seven sins unite' Liked :)
Thanks Simran :-)
Deletethis is a provocative set. The first line really gives it impact.
ReplyDeleteThank You PattiKen :-)
DeleteVery nicely woven --
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Thanks a lot :-)
DeleteSeven sins unite...drew me right in to your prism of color. Very thought-provoking. I like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteThat's the beauty of a prism! It seems sterile by itself! But once unmasked it's exactly as you've described it! Nicely written Green!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
DeleteVery thoughtful haiku !!
ReplyDeleteI like it so much GS!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thank You so much :-)
Deletethat was so innovative and fresh,
ReplyDeletewhen will I attempt haiku...:(
Why don't you start today? :-)
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