Thursday, September 20, 2012

Escape



Haunting memories,
Frozen across bleeding veins,
A futile escape.

Hollow walls plundered,
Looting red sea of jewels,
Locked away in peace.


This Haiku is shared with Sensational Haiku Wednesday and the Prompt is Escape.




28 comments:

  1. Wow! so lovely :) Escaping the haunting memories :) We should all let & flow the pain out :)

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  2. It's beautiful.. but then I don't have to remind you. You are the king!

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  3. well chosen words ~ very descriptive and concise ~ beautiful! ~ (A Creative Harbor)

    thanks for 'coming by and commenting' ^_^

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  4. Lovely set, specially the first one ~ You are getting better at haiku ~

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    1. Thanks for the encouragement Grace :-)

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  5. Haunting memories...
    Very nice!!!

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  6. Very interesting haikus, disturbing memories are hard to obscure.

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  7. Wow! Beautiful image your words creating!
    ''Locked away in peace'' sounds of anguish in solitary!

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  8. You are catching the Haiku fever ... I especially like the first one!! :)

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    1. Yeah, I am really up with fever :-P

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  9. An end but perhaps not a peaceful or fitting one? The conflict and anger is subtly and strongly conveyed..Jae

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  10. This is beautiful. It took me a second to wrap my mind around, but I like that.

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  11. very talented post and poetry.

    how do you do?
    check out poets rally today,

    welcome join us for a week of fun,
    cheers.

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    1. Thanks for such a warm welcome :-)

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  12. Such a nice piece..you really are the magician! I love this one, and the picture goes too well with it. Keep it up :)

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