he should have
cried
but he refused
smiling away the pain
that threatened to leap
out with his tears
those salty streams
that wound across your cheeks
and flatten the heart
8.3, they said
just a number, perhaps
(when the earth shook, violently)
he laughed
at the golden wreck
he once called
home
scales measure the quake
but never the ache
This Poem is shared with Imaginary Garden With Real Toads.
Amrit, like a punch to the gut. ~ M
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteThis is an interesting connection between the richter scale and the pain of heartache which you have explored.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kerry :-)
DeleteThat ending is really well done ~
ReplyDeletescales measure the quake
but never the ache
I can relate to the aftermath of the earthquake because I too have experienced it ~ Happy Sunday ~
Have a great week :-)
DeleteThis poem works literally and figuratively ... excellent.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteTruly, a heart wrenching, and gut twisting poem...Pain can never be measured on any scale...
ReplyDeleteThat's correct !!!
DeleteThis is really thought-provoking Amrit. Very poignant yet subtly written. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :-)
DeleteSpeechless after reading this.... Bravo :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Priyanka :-)
DeleteLast 2 lines are at its best...
ReplyDeleteLoved this Amrit :)
Thanks Satya :-)
DeleteI like the image of a flat heart, in a gritty sort of way. And the paradox in a 'golden wreck'. Great ending!
ReplyDeleteNice one
ReplyDeleteThanks Ali :-)
DeleteOH. MY. The way you've combined the psychological and physical aspect of an earthquake is amazing.
ReplyDeleteThis poem makes one's heart beat faster.
Thank You Lubaina :-)
Deleteits reminding me of an ad by al jajeera, earthquake not only causes national loss but also personal loss on a very high level.
ReplyDeleteThanks Asteria :-)
DeleteThe last two lines are simply brilliant Amrit, they tell the complete story...
ReplyDeleteAh, the last lines.
ReplyDeleteI was wondering what the title could mean when it showed on my dashboard. Totally worth the read.
Thanks Vaishali :-)
DeletePowerful!
ReplyDeleteHit me hard, the last line. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ayushee :-)
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