Saturday, September 15, 2012

Rue


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Reverse steps follow,
Uncharted by-lane snuggles,
Encompassed regret.


This Acrostic Haiku is shared with Acrostic Only and the Prompt is Rue.





26 comments:

  1. I like this ... and now I have to check out this challenge.

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    1. Yeah you should check out this challenge ... it's fun :-)

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  2. I'm not sure... I don't think I understood the message. Maybe it's just me. I loved the other posts though. :)

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    1. Thanks for liking the other posts :-) Here, I tried to personalize the feelings of rue and regret :-)

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  3. The path is irreversible.

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  4. For starters ... the word 'rue' has always intrigued me .. then, you combine two of my favorite forms creating one amazing poem. WOW!

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    1. Thanks Helen :-) I just tried my best. I'm glad you liked it :-)

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  5. regret is very powerful.. it holds you back and at times can be paralyzing. Very powerful haiku Amrit!

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  6. Very nice... not good to rue behaviour though. :(

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  7. Love the way you did an acrostic with the word! Clever.

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  8. Those backward steps...can hurt. Powerful poem.

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  9. Very difficult to move on being bogged down by rue and regret. Nice one!

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  10. I've never done an acrostic haiku before but after this I might give it a try. Awesome write!

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  11. There is so much depth in these few words. Left me feeling strange and alone. I'll have to check out Acrostics, looks like fun.

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    1. I enjoy acrostics ... they are challenging :-)

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