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Fluttering feathers,
Rain upon the lonesome souls,
Battlefield laughs.
Prey in abundance,
Walls collapse, fences broken,
Red streams quench its thirst.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Battlefield.
OMG! I love this one.. very powerful!!! I could feel the blackness!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranita :-)
Delete"Red streams quench it's thirt" - that is POWERFUL. Incredible imagery with words.
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
DeleteBattlefield is happy, of course. What else could it want? Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
Deleteone can very well the words here....
ReplyDeletebeautifully penned....:)
Thank You Irfanuddin :-)
DeleteA beautiful short story about a bloody battlefield that's laughing because war is such a loss of time.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeletePowerful last line to a powerful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank You Barbara :-)
DeleteBeautiful from the beginning to the very last word.. what astonishing imagery, it makes me feel like I'm there.. and I can feel and hear their souls crying, and screaming. WOW!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
Deletepowerful writing greeny, also heartbreaking.
ReplyDeleteThank You Paige and Shauna :-)
DeleteVery powerful words today. I am partial to the first two lines - they say it all really - poor souls :-(
ReplyDeleteYou possess great wit,Green! Battlefield in a lighter vein. Beautifully written!
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Thank You Hank :-)
Deletewonderfully written :) !
ReplyDeleteThank You Dana :-)
Deletevery powerful Haiku!
ReplyDeleteyou do write the most powerful haiku!!! Great job!!
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shakira
Thank You Shakira :-)
DeleteThanks Mama Zen :-)
ReplyDeleteVery strong and powerful! Liked it very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jolly :-)
DeleteYou have shown the somber quality of a battlefield well.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteYou've drawn me into the thick of the battle with your words...
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OMG.. very powerful lines...
ReplyDeleteThank You Odyzz :-)
Delete"Battlefield laughs and red streams quench its thirst." eta sotti bohut bhalo hoyeche, eto bhalo hoyeche je ami english bhule gelam :D you are awesomely talented!
ReplyDeleteI hope jeno tumi abaar taratari English sikhe jao :-P Thanks Dark Angel :-)
DeleteWow--intense.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
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