Thursday, September 20, 2012

Lights



Divine creation,
Pride gleaming in golden smile,
And let there be light.

Replica restored,
Deception plays with senses,
Blind man searches light.

Olympics in flow,
Medals honoring the knights,
Heavy-weight and light.

Obey traffic rules,
Stop when Red, Wait for the Green,
Lights directing path.

Firefly stumbles,
In the galaxy of stars,
Dancing with the lights.



This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Lights.




38 comments:

  1. Wonderfully composed series on light. The one with the firefly in it is my favorite.

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  2. Beautiful set... very beautiful... i esp lik the second and the last one a lot!!! Love the idea of a firefly stumbling amongst stars... DreamY! :)

    Jingles of celebration!

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  3. I love this ... Always looking for the light ... At the end of the tunnel ...

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  4. Oh my! The last one took my breath away!

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  5. Enjoyed your set of haiku very much. The last one is my favourite. "dancing with the lights"

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  6. I enjoyed this haiku---just beautifully written!

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  7. You've brilliantly covered everything of lights most profoundly! Nicely Green!

    Hank

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  8. Brilliant haikus!
    I could see the golden smile in the image.
    The last one is my fave.
    :)

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  9. OH MY GOODNESS! That was amazing!!! I love the flow, the rhythm as well as the stellar imagery! I can only imagine how you must have felt writing it!

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    1. Thanks Crystal .... I felt quite "light"- headed while writing it ;-)

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  10. I do my share of stumbling....

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  11. Each haiku is a star by itself...
    VAried thoughts on the prompt..
    Yet so well together!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/lights-on.html

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    1. Thank You for such lovely words ... I am glad you liked it :-)

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  12. great package of haiku...nicely done..

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  13. Beautiful post!
    Lovely lines!
    The last line specially,like took my heart away! <3

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  14. Loved all of them, the last one was my fav!

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  15. Fine set of Haiku. The first and the last are my best ones. :-)

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  16. Very nice. I love the last one (fireflies are wonderful) and the Olympics one.

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  17. A great variation of the prompt ... my favorite is the last one, although, in the south we call them "lightning bugs" :) Great read today!!

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