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Divine creation,
Pride gleaming in golden smile,
And let there be light.
Replica restored,
Deception plays with senses,
Blind man searches light.
Olympics in flow,
Medals honoring the knights,
Heavy-weight and light.
Obey traffic rules,
Stop when Red, Wait for the Green,
Lights directing path.
Firefly stumbles,
In the galaxy of stars,
Dancing with the lights.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Lights.
Wonderfully composed series on light. The one with the firefly in it is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful set... very beautiful... i esp lik the second and the last one a lot!!! Love the idea of a firefly stumbling amongst stars... DreamY! :)
ReplyDeleteJingles of celebration!
I love this ... Always looking for the light ... At the end of the tunnel ...
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteOh my! The last one took my breath away!
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
DeleteVery well crafted.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
DeleteEnjoyed your set of haiku very much. The last one is my favourite. "dancing with the lights"
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this haiku---just beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteThank You Audrey :-)
DeleteYou've brilliantly covered everything of lights most profoundly! Nicely Green!
ReplyDeleteHank
Brilliant haikus!
ReplyDeleteI could see the golden smile in the image.
The last one is my fave.
:)
Thank You Dulcina :-)
DeleteOH MY GOODNESS! That was amazing!!! I love the flow, the rhythm as well as the stellar imagery! I can only imagine how you must have felt writing it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal .... I felt quite "light"- headed while writing it ;-)
DeleteI do my share of stumbling....
ReplyDeleteMe too ;-)
DeleteEach haiku is a star by itself...
ReplyDeleteVAried thoughts on the prompt..
Yet so well together!!!
http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/lights-on.html
Thank You for such lovely words ... I am glad you liked it :-)
Deletegreat package of haiku...nicely done..
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteBeautiful post!
ReplyDeleteLovely lines!
The last line specially,like took my heart away! <3
Thanks so much Sakshi :-)
DeleteLoved all of them, the last one was my fav!
ReplyDeleteFine set of Haiku. The first and the last are my best ones. :-)
ReplyDeleteVery nice. I love the last one (fireflies are wonderful) and the Olympics one.
ReplyDeleteA great variation of the prompt ... my favorite is the last one, although, in the south we call them "lightning bugs" :) Great read today!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Becca :-)
Deletesuperb.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rachel :-)
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