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Run paper-boat, run,
Through myriad dreams of sand,
Shape them with your touch.
Paddle through the night,
Sinking in divine glory,
Let's sail to the moon.
Noah held the torch,
As waves caressed your soft skin,
Paper-boat, savior.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Paper-boat.
Beautiful haiku! Especially the ending on the last.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ben :-)
DeleteBeautiful boat story...:)
ReplyDeleteLovely. Especially the visuals in the last one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bren :-)
DeleteYour poem soothed my soul today .... I needed it.
ReplyDeleteI am glad it did :-)
DeleteSounds peaceful, calm and serene.
ReplyDeleteReally magical, somewhat reminds me of my childhood.
ReplyDeleteThank You Leovi :-)
DeleteLovely, like being in a dream! Very well done, Mr. Speck! I really like the paper boat savior.
ReplyDeleteI am touched by everything relating to moon
ReplyDeleteSo am I :-)
DeleteI enjoyed your set of haiku very much, I could not pick a favourite this time because I like them all. "paper-boat savior" sums them up nicely/
ReplyDelete"dreams of sand" -- great word image. Like it a lot.
ReplyDeletevery sweet composition... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteA delightful read.. enchanted! I like the idea of sailing to the moon in a paperboat! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pranita :-)
DeleteDelightful trio.
ReplyDeleteThanks vivinfrance :-)
DeleteAlong the desert, through the sky, along the sea, very beautiful journey.
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Thanks Wrey and Robby :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful set of haiku. Every one a little gem. Well done.
ReplyDeleteAh! That was like a dreamy journey! And in the end to be saved by the paper boat! Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Jolly :-)
DeleteLovely take on the prompt. Very well done
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
DeleteThank God I did not miss reading this one!
ReplyDeleteRun paper boat run!
Lovely again!
I believe I should now find more adjectives! :D
Ha ha ... don't worry, the same adjectives will work.
DeleteThanks for such wonderful words Sakshi :-)
This is fantastic! Another great work from you :)
ReplyDeleteIt begins with a great line..
ReplyDeleteAnd it continues to b awesome...
Very good
Thank You Locomente :-)
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