(Image Source: http://photography.nationalgeographic.com)
Disguised miracle,
Symphony of colors float,
God's bow arched, divine.
Droplets twinkle bright,
Symphony of failed music,
In your maiden eyes.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Symphony.
Good one, I liked it!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazingly beautiful..a happy surprise here..thanks!!!
ReplyDeleteRainbows are beautiful..maybe because they are fleeting..hope and loss..failed music..lovely..Jae
ReplyDeleteThanks Jae :-)
DeleteWOW! Just wow! This is such a wonderfully composed set of haiku, I love the first the most. That picture of the double rainbow ... just gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteLove this set--thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteOh boy!! These are wonderful! I just love the disguised miracle.
ReplyDeleteThank You Barbara :-)
DeleteSo deep!!! Loved it.. loved the words together as 'colours float' WOW! who thinks of such synonyms for rainbow*, absolutely touched reading it. The Second Haiku is very outstanding, definitely touches the strings of heart instantly!!!
ReplyDelete~Keep the Spark ALive..
Thank You Rachana ... thanks for appreciating and liking this :-)
DeleteYes, it is true in the rainbow colors float, a delight.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
DeleteSymphony of colors float--great line! and so fun to say :-) Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYour words are as beautiful as the picture.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura :-)
DeleteThis haiku gave me chills! Isn't that what all good art does? And God is the greatest painter! Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
DeleteSorry, I'll try this again. These are very special haiku. I especially like the second one with the line "Symphony of failed music" Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteAh see that Ellecee ... also liked the same line... "symphony of failed music" beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank You PKP :-)
DeleteI like this very much, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy :-)
DeleteJust love it..very expressive. I am about to write a haiku soon. Hopefully it'll go right.
ReplyDeleteAll the best ... waiting for your haiku :-)
DeleteVery nice. I really like the images you've creeated.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patti :-)
DeleteWhen first looked at (stanza 2)it appears a failed music. But it is everything perfect (stanza 1) Brilliantly done,Green!
ReplyDeleteHank
"God's bow arched divine" - Wonderful
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
DeleteSo much is beautifully expressed here in so few words ! Maybe you are comparing the droplets which created the rainbow as God's perfect creation and which brings joy with that of the tears in beloved's eyes, which makes a heart sad.
ReplyDeleteI loved the interpretation you put forward ... thanks for liking :-)
DeleteEach line is a jewel and all of them make a treasure.
ReplyDeleteI always say rainbows are clear miracles, but I also like them in disguise.
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Thanks Dulcina :-)
DeleteFull of wonderful imagery
ReplyDeletethis was a peaceful happy read this morning. love the picture you painted here.. nice interpretation
ReplyDeleteThanks Unfetteredbs :-)
DeleteAmazing Haiku. You just ROCK symphony here!!! Well done.
ReplyDeleteNow I am so tempted to do..LOL
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shakira
Ha ha ... thanks so much Shakira :-)
Delete'symphony of colours float' is just amazing. What a great way of describing a rainbow, a miracle indeed. The second one is sad and sweet and lovely too. Loved them both!
ReplyDeleteThank You Jolly :-)
DeleteThe imagery that you've created in both the haiku is BEAUTIFUL. There is everything between those lines... love, nature, sadness, colors, miracle. What more could one want in a poem?! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Vaishali :-)
DeleteI too liked the "symphony of colors float"..beautiful imagery..
ReplyDeleteStill working on symphony. This haiku fits divine as well as symphony. `God's bow arched divine'-gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
DeleteI like the image, "disguised miracle". Speaks a lot!
ReplyDeleteThank You Leo :-)
DeleteNicely done - as usual :)
ReplyDeletehttp://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/
Thanks Stephen :-)
DeleteNothing sadder than failed music...
ReplyDeleteSymphony of Seeds
Indeed !!!
DeleteBeautifully woven -- my favorite is the first Haiku ... each line is absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Repertoire of Notes
Thanks Becca :-)
Delete`symphony of failed music' can be taken many ways. So creative!
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