Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Symphony



Disguised miracle,
Symphony of colors float,
God's bow arched, divine.

Droplets twinkle bright,
Symphony of failed music,
In your maiden eyes.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Symphony.




64 comments:

  1. This is amazingly beautiful..a happy surprise here..thanks!!!

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  2. Rainbows are beautiful..maybe because they are fleeting..hope and loss..failed music..lovely..Jae

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  3. WOW! Just wow! This is such a wonderfully composed set of haiku, I love the first the most. That picture of the double rainbow ... just gorgeous.

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  4. Love this set--thanks for sharing!

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  5. Oh boy!! These are wonderful! I just love the disguised miracle.

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  6. So deep!!! Loved it.. loved the words together as 'colours float' WOW! who thinks of such synonyms for rainbow*, absolutely touched reading it. The Second Haiku is very outstanding, definitely touches the strings of heart instantly!!!
    ~Keep the Spark ALive..

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    1. Thank You Rachana ... thanks for appreciating and liking this :-)

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  7. Yes, it is true in the rainbow colors float, a delight.

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  8. Symphony of colors float--great line! and so fun to say :-) Beautiful.

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  9. Your words are as beautiful as the picture.

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  10. This haiku gave me chills! Isn't that what all good art does? And God is the greatest painter! Thank you for sharing!

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  11. Sorry, I'll try this again. These are very special haiku. I especially like the second one with the line "Symphony of failed music" Nicely done.

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  12. Ah see that Ellecee ... also liked the same line... "symphony of failed music" beautiful :)

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  13. Just love it..very expressive. I am about to write a haiku soon. Hopefully it'll go right.

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    1. All the best ... waiting for your haiku :-)

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  14. Very nice. I really like the images you've creeated.

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  15. When first looked at (stanza 2)it appears a failed music. But it is everything perfect (stanza 1) Brilliantly done,Green!

    Hank

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  16. "God's bow arched divine" - Wonderful

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  17. So much is beautifully expressed here in so few words ! Maybe you are comparing the droplets which created the rainbow as God's perfect creation and which brings joy with that of the tears in beloved's eyes, which makes a heart sad.

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    1. I loved the interpretation you put forward ... thanks for liking :-)

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  18. Each line is a jewel and all of them make a treasure.
    I always say rainbows are clear miracles, but I also like them in disguise.
    :)

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  19. this was a peaceful happy read this morning. love the picture you painted here.. nice interpretation

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  20. Amazing Haiku. You just ROCK symphony here!!! Well done.
    Now I am so tempted to do..LOL
    hugs
    shakira

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    1. Ha ha ... thanks so much Shakira :-)

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  21. 'symphony of colours float' is just amazing. What a great way of describing a rainbow, a miracle indeed. The second one is sad and sweet and lovely too. Loved them both!

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  22. The imagery that you've created in both the haiku is BEAUTIFUL. There is everything between those lines... love, nature, sadness, colors, miracle. What more could one want in a poem?! :)

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  23. I too liked the "symphony of colors float"..beautiful imagery..

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  24. Still working on symphony. This haiku fits divine as well as symphony. `God's bow arched divine'-gorgeous.

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  25. I like the image, "disguised miracle". Speaks a lot!

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  26. Nicely done - as usual :)

    http://merlinspielen.com/2012/09/13/summer-symphony/

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  27. Beautifully woven -- my favorite is the first Haiku ... each line is absolutely lovely!
    September Heights - Repertoire of Notes

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  28. `symphony of failed music' can be taken many ways. So creative!

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