Thursday, September 27, 2012

Waltz



A slow waltz tonight,
Naughty waves tickle my feet,
Dancing with the moon.

Memories whisper,
Sliding under white linen,
Waltzing with the corpse.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Waltz.





48 comments:

  1. Nice take on the prompt !

    Take Care

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  2. Interesting one ... very well executed ..!!

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  3. Very romantic!!! Loved it.. esp naughty waves tickling feet and sliding under the white linen!!!

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  4. Oh my! This is an eerie one.

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  5. You compose the most dreamy haiku .........

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  6. Really magical, beautiful waltz with the moon.

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  7. Wonderful set. The 1st is my favorite espescially the last line. Dancing in the moon.

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  8. These present such a contrast. The second one is haunting, and it's my favorite.

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  9. Ooooooooo second one is spooooooooooooky.

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  10. Oh my!! You set me up for romance in the first, then BAM a surprise! A tale with a twist in 6 lines! Love it!

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  11. Wow, these are special,,,,my favourite is the first one with "dancing with the moon"

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  12. Beautiful haiku set, Green! But taken aback at the ending. Somewhat morbid to me. Nicely!

    Hank

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  13. Makes me think of all the beautiful options....

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  14. Beautiful and romantic, though the second one has some morbid undertones. very well written

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  15. Maybe waltzing with a dead love...?
    The moon will never abandon you, but she is far and has many lovers.
    I like all the lines, but my favourite line is this one:
    Sliding under white linen, so deep, so real, so...
    From dreams to reality, again.
    :)

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  16. you are amazing .........such wonderful thoughts.....

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  17. waltzing with a corpse...amazing!!!

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  18. glad to have finally caught on to your meaning for #2... the 'obvious' interpretation is slightly macarbre!

    great haiku!

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  19. Great set, I love especially the second, which is very dark indeed.

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  20. Oh! Very different! Romance and darkness married and waltzing together :)

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  21. I'd like to be a dancing partner to the naught waves!

    Wilderness Waltz

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  22. waltzing with the corpse? man! How could you think of something like that? It reminded me of lady gaga's bad romance!

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    1. I just thought :-) Thanks for such beautiful comment :-)

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