Friday, September 14, 2012

Creation



Ripples in Eden,
The Devil mocks naughtily,
Creation of lust.

A drop of nectar,
Heaven responding to prayers,
Divine creation.

Shadowy gallows,
Hero smiles at Creation,
Tears of victory.

The Lord's Creation,
Unicorn flies to the moon,
Purity conceived.


This Haiku is written for Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Creation.




48 comments:

  1. Oh WOW! I totally get it and I must say, I'm blown away! This is certainly one way of looking at it.. my oh my.. Beautiful!

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  2. That's creation indeed...well done..

    RS:)

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  3. Beautiful words and images. Well done.


    Melanie

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  4. I love these beautiful haikus.

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  5. Love the images you've created!!

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  6. Nice. The unicorn made me smile. So that's where he went!

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  7. lovely post:)
    much love,
    saharious

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  8. You have shared with us many kinds of creation and I enjoyed them all. I especially like the last line "purity conceived"
    Thank you.

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  9. The beauty of creation captured in many episodes through time. Nicely Green!

    Hank

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  10. Awesome set of haiku ... wonderfullly composed creation.

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  11. multi-layered set .. created magnificently

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  12. Sir, you created CREATION here! Well done!
    PEACE!

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  13. Wonderful creation you have created, from devil to purity, from Earth to Moon.
    :)

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  14. Very descriptive with a smell of creativity. Keep it up:)

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  15. Beautiful haiku on creation, where you are talking about two types of creation-of love and lust, -all are self created,inside of us, yet attributed to God and Devil, very well done !

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  16. Beutiful haiku amrit ... good one ..

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  17. Beautiful haiku set...Explored the concept of 'creation' in different perspectives...Good job!

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  18. The Devil mocks naughtily

    Yes, he does ... with evil malice as well!!
    Nice set!! Thank you for your visit.

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  19. Beautiful haikus. Loved them. Cheers, Ruby

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  20. The first haiku is my favorite, although I am partial to unicorns.

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