Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Divine

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Kohl lined eyes, answers,
The lonesome prayers of hearts,
Aah, Divine Beauty.

Cloudy spectators,
Moon baths in shadowy rays,
The Divine Kingdom.


This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Divine.




52 comments:

  1. The first one I see sharp eyes in your imaginations!

    The second one had me blown! lovely kingdom!!!

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  2. Both are spectacular! Earthy and heavenly beauty.

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  3. I absolutely adore this haiku ya... esp d idea of cloudy spectators! Beautiful! :)

    Cradling star rock in pious palms

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  4. Nice take on the divine prompt ~

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  5. Ooh... I especially like the second one... gorgeous.

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  6. I really enjoyed both these haiku. They paint beautiful images.

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  7. Oh so beautiful! I doubt anyone could ever top that!

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  8. Earthly and heavenly delights, very nice.

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  9. Moon baths in shadowy rays....Wow! these are lovely!

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  10. hi greenie, your poem is a breath of divine-ness.

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  11. My favorite was the first - such graphic imagery. Wonderful

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  12. Oh, that was some artistry. I still envy people who are good at literature.

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  13. Ther 1st haiku is marvelous!!!

    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2012/09/home-is-divine.html

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  14. Wow, I love your Divine Kingdom!
    Good contrast, divine.
    :)

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  15. WOW!!! What can I say more ... I will be silent ... so divine.

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  16. Wonderfully written ... :)

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  17. Brilliant and beautiful haiku. The first one is a stunner!

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  18. This is so beautiful...I loved the second one....

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  19. Very powerful haiku - wow! It echoes in my mind with each reading

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