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Kohl lined eyes, answers,
The lonesome prayers of hearts,
Aah, Divine Beauty.
Cloudy spectators,
Moon baths in shadowy rays,
The Divine Kingdom.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Divine.
The first one I see sharp eyes in your imaginations!
ReplyDeleteThe second one had me blown! lovely kingdom!!!
Thanks Maharukh :-)
DeleteBoth are spectacular! Earthy and heavenly beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
DeleteI absolutely adore this haiku ya... esp d idea of cloudy spectators! Beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteCradling star rock in pious palms
Thank You Pranita :-)
DeleteNice take on the divine prompt ~
ReplyDeleteOoh... I especially like the second one... gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteThank You Laurie :-)
DeleteI really enjoyed both these haiku. They paint beautiful images.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Divinely inspired :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dana :-)
DeleteExquisite haikus.
ReplyDeleteThank You Leovi :-)
DeleteOh so beautiful! I doubt anyone could ever top that!
ReplyDeleteThank You Crystal :-)
DeleteEarthly and heavenly delights, very nice.
ReplyDeleteThank You Patti :-)
DeleteMoon baths in shadowy rays....Wow! these are lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks Barbara :-)
Deletehi greenie, your poem is a breath of divine-ness.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteMy favorite was the first - such graphic imagery. Wonderful
ReplyDeleteOh, that was some artistry. I still envy people who are good at literature.
ReplyDeleteThank You Noblesse :-)
DeleteTher 1st haiku is marvelous!!!
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Thanks buddy :-)
DeleteWow, I love your Divine Kingdom!
ReplyDeleteGood contrast, divine.
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Thank You Dulcina :-)
DeleteThanks Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteWOW!!! What can I say more ... I will be silent ... so divine.
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written ... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteBrilliant and beautiful haiku. The first one is a stunner!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :-)
DeleteThis is so beautiful...I loved the second one....
ReplyDeleteVery interesting...!
ReplyDeleteVery nice with both directions!!
ReplyDeleteSeptember Heights - Mercy and Grace
Who is able to live in this kingdom?
ReplyDeleteDivine
We all can :-)
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ReplyDeletethanks Unfetteredbs :-)
DeleteVery powerful haiku - wow! It echoes in my mind with each reading
ReplyDeleteThank You Stephen :-)
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