whirling on toes
arms placed on waists
her eyes are calm
swaying sans haste
adorned in white
as pretty as snow flake
she reminds me of swans
and peace in a lake
her nimble feet create
a world that feels divine
the one with music
the one with rhymes
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What a lovely poem this is Amrit.
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DeleteI really love the imagery and the enjoyment that spills out of this poem like soothing music. The subject is in such a tranquil place, and watching her there does the same for the speaker (and reader). I'm with Old Egg, this is a lovely piece.
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DeleteHaving read the comments prior to mine, I wholeheartedly agree! There is a gentle, purity of thought feel in your lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteYour poem reads like a slow waltz! Delightful.
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DeleteVery nice! :) I agree with all the other comments.
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DeleteYes – very visual, with a lovely dance rhythm and a tranquil feel.
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DeleteWatching a dancer makes one appreciate the gracefulness of the dance.
ReplyDeleteFigure skating is also a similar display of soft beauty, on ice.
Nice to see you here again, like old times.
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Thanks Jim :-)
DeleteSwans and peace in a lake evoke such a great picture.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem, warm greetings!
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DeleteYou could slow dance to this poem. Lovely!
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