Ah, maybe it was a good thing that the secrets been washed away? Sometimes it is better that way.
Sometimes, yes :-)
I love it that the rain washed away her tears. Gotta love the rain.
I hate when the rain removes the evidence of young love and heartbreak. I know the release should make me happy, but I treasured those diaries!
Thank You Susan :-)
There is something very deep & profound about those emotions which you have captured so well in this gem of a poem :)
Thanks Sanaa :-)
there was this very old song, Diary, I think that you have reminded me with your haiku. guess, it's time to move on - no more memories of regret
Thank You :-)
The rain has an amazing effect like this...to clean us from our heartache and pain...beautiful!
Thanks Donna :-)
What better to walk in the rain when you are sad as you then have a sympathetic friend by your side.
Well said :-)
Ohhh, this is SO lovely.
Thanks a lot :-)
Beautiful. Maybe the washing away of secrets paves the way for a new start !
aw...the spoil sport rain...with those pages vanished some some whispers of the heart....sigh...
Always the spoilsport :-/
Crisp and perfect! :)
Thank You Pooja :-)
awesome... :)
Thanks Archana :-)
Poor girl! :(
Sadly :-(
Rain washes away a lot of things. At times, it is good.
Lovely thought ! I am still learning to write Haiku. :)
Thanks Salvwi. Haiku is fun :-)
Powerful!
Thank You Celestine :-)
What a powerful piece..sometimes it is good to be given back an empty page..maybe better things can fill them..
Yes you are right :-)
I agree a very powerful piece ... and beautifully written .. bravo! Bastet
Thanks Bastet :-)
Now it belongs to the earth---all the heart aches & bitterness of a young love. That's quite a sad love story for such a short piece---a Novella that doesn't believe in forever. Smiles.
Thank You Kelvin :-)
Washing away the pain is a wonderful feeling.
I agree :-)
I enjoyed the narrative quality of this poem.
Familiar feeling here....maybe the rain is right on time thing just to let it go, free room for new passions and ...tears.
nice! :)
Thanks Meera :-)
Touching little poem.
Thanks Rosemary :-)
Ah, maybe it was a good thing that the secrets been washed away? Sometimes it is better that way.
ReplyDeleteSometimes, yes :-)
DeleteI love it that the rain washed away her tears. Gotta love the rain.
ReplyDeleteI hate when the rain removes the evidence of young love and heartbreak. I know the release should make me happy, but I treasured those diaries!
ReplyDeleteThank You Susan :-)
DeleteThere is something very deep & profound about those emotions which you have captured so well in this gem of a poem :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa :-)
Deletethere was this very old song, Diary, I think that you have reminded me with your haiku. guess, it's time to move on - no more memories of regret
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteThe rain has an amazing effect like this...to clean us from our heartache and pain...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Donna :-)
DeleteWhat better to walk in the rain when you are sad as you then have a sympathetic friend by your side.
ReplyDeleteWell said :-)
DeleteOhhh, this is SO lovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteBeautiful. Maybe the washing away of secrets paves the way for a new start !
ReplyDeleteaw...the spoil sport rain...with those pages vanished some some whispers of the heart....sigh...
ReplyDeleteAlways the spoilsport :-/
DeleteCrisp and perfect! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pooja :-)
Deleteawesome... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Archana :-)
DeletePoor girl! :(
ReplyDeleteSadly :-(
DeleteRain washes away a lot of things. At times, it is good.
ReplyDeleteLovely thought ! I am still learning to write Haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Salvwi. Haiku is fun :-)
DeletePowerful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteWhat a powerful piece..sometimes it is good to be given back an empty page..maybe better things can fill them..
ReplyDeleteYes you are right :-)
DeleteI agree a very powerful piece ... and beautifully written .. bravo! Bastet
ReplyDeleteThanks Bastet :-)
DeleteNow it belongs to the earth---all the heart aches & bitterness of a young love. That's quite a sad love story for such a short piece---a Novella that doesn't believe in forever. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kelvin :-)
DeleteWashing away the pain is a wonderful feeling.
ReplyDeleteI agree :-)
DeleteI enjoyed the narrative quality of this poem.
ReplyDeleteFamiliar feeling here....maybe the rain is right on time thing just to let it go, free room for new passions and ...tears.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletenice! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera :-)
DeleteTouching little poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary :-)
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