Monday, June 15, 2015

Secrets

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the rain washed away
secrets stored in her diary
along with those tears


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50 comments:

  1. Ah, maybe it was a good thing that the secrets been washed away? Sometimes it is better that way.

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  2. I love it that the rain washed away her tears. Gotta love the rain.

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  3. I hate when the rain removes the evidence of young love and heartbreak. I know the release should make me happy, but I treasured those diaries!

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  4. There is something very deep & profound about those emotions which you have captured so well in this gem of a poem :)

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  5. there was this very old song, Diary, I think that you have reminded me with your haiku. guess, it's time to move on - no more memories of regret

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  6. The rain has an amazing effect like this...to clean us from our heartache and pain...beautiful!

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  7. What better to walk in the rain when you are sad as you then have a sympathetic friend by your side.

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  8. Beautiful. Maybe the washing away of secrets paves the way for a new start !

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  9. aw...the spoil sport rain...with those pages vanished some some whispers of the heart....sigh...

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  10. Rain washes away a lot of things. At times, it is good.

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  11. Lovely thought ! I am still learning to write Haiku. :)

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  12. What a powerful piece..sometimes it is good to be given back an empty page..maybe better things can fill them..

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  13. I agree a very powerful piece ... and beautifully written .. bravo! Bastet

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  14. Now it belongs to the earth---all the heart aches & bitterness of a young love. That's quite a sad love story for such a short piece---a Novella that doesn't believe in forever. Smiles.

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  15. Washing away the pain is a wonderful feeling.

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  16. I enjoyed the narrative quality of this poem.

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  17. Familiar feeling here....maybe the rain is right on time thing just to let it go, free room for new passions and ...tears.

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