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wild pebbles
swim across stream of spring
in untamed valley
in untamed valley
Adam and Eve chase birds
red cherry blushes
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Onitsura's Valley Stream.
Beautiful thoughts! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
Deletehey ram,
ReplyDeleteand the rest you know...:)
Yes, the rest I know :P
Deleteha...interesting...wild pebbles is a cool though...there is a bit of magic in the first...and the second is a fun thought....
ReplyDeletePebbles in a stream...reminds me of being a youngster and playing in the stream by my house :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Keith :-)
DeleteWonderful haiku set Green. Thank you for sharing. I can hear the stream.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kristjaan :-)
DeleteUntamed valleys have a certain allure for me...
ReplyDeleteSinging Stone
Yes they are depicted in your pics :-)
Deletelovely cascading haiku ~ Enjoy ^_^
ReplyDeletebeautiful.. love the image of swimming pebbles and red cherry blush
ReplyDeletevery cool images you've created .... love the way you've personified the pebbles and the cherry!
ReplyDeleteThank You Joanne :-)
Deleteenticing images...love the 'red cherry blush'!:)
ReplyDeleteWonderful cascades,GS! There's a strange cool effect in an untamed valley!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thank You Hank :-)
Delete.. tiny pebbles do swim accross along with streams... ah,love the magical motion in there... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin :-)
DeleteUntamed really draws me into your poem. The wilderness can be so nourishing in its solitude!
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Thank You WabiSabi :-)
Deletethat untamed valley... how many secrets would it spill if it could!
ReplyDeleteTrue ... it hold stories :-)
DeleteExcellent Lines! Loved the way ur thoughts seamlessly flow from one verse to another!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ruby :-)
Deletewild pebbles is a marvelous thought.
ReplyDeleteI love pebbles, and I love this haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThis really refreshes me!
ReplyDeleteNice string here, G.S. The wild pebbles and Adam and Eve have the red cherry blushing, even here in the untamed valley. Vivid!
ReplyDeletewild pebbles
swim across stream of spring
in untamed valley
in untamed valley
Adam and Eve chase birds
red cherry blushes
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aloha Green Speck. i like the pebbles that are carried along in your stream. great observation. aloha.
ReplyDeleteThank You Rick :-)
DeleteI liked the concept, Adam and Eve chasing birds in untamed valley, may be there is no fear of expulsion.
ReplyDeletePerhaps that was the case then :-)
DeleteLovely imagination :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
DeleteLiked the freedom pulsating in those lines . Perfect choice of words to heighten the spirit too :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Maliny :-)
DeleteSometimes thoughts make us feeble.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those encounters.
Maybe it's not in the words, in the depth maybe.
Thanks Stuti :-)
DeleteThere's something about a gushing stream that energizes the tired mind...
ReplyDeleteloved the red-cherry-blush :)
Thank You Reshma :-)
DeleteAnd they flee,
ReplyDeleteAnd they flee,
To a yonder valley
where they sin
By gulping the red cheery :) :)
Nicely concocted....
Thanks for the wonderful addition Ritwika :-)
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