melting sun
kisses her snowy gaze
cascading warmth
weather warriors
break apart snowy terrains
inviting spring
snow flakes
flies back to the moon
winter in stars
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Yuki No Hate (End Of Snow).
loved the third one.. My obsession with the moon :)
ReplyDeleteI love moon too :-)
DeleteThat second stanza was beautiful my friend.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this....especially that third stanza.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteI love the imagery of your 3rd, but they are all wonderful as usual. thank you :)
ReplyDeleteMelting Sun is it??
ReplyDeleteI loved that usage!
Thank You Satya :-)
DeleteA whole new approach to the topic . Loved the way you have dissected it to subtle layers . Beautiful as usual :)
ReplyDeleteI love the last set / snowflakes remain in the moon and stars
ReplyDeleteexcellent
hope you have a warm weekend
Thank You Moondustwriter :-)
Deletetender description of the end of snow...my heart melted ;-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteThank You Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteI am glad, G.S, that I don' have to pass judgement on these. They are all very nicely written, starting with the Sun who initiates the process and ending with the heavens so that those snow flakes may return another day.
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Thanks so much Jim :-)
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