(Image Source: http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/2013/03/carpe-diem-special-28-onitsuras-cherry.html)
sea nymph kisses
blushing cherry blossoms
spring raining love
spring raining love
she flies with the bees
in search of nectar
in search of nectar
they swim across the petals
tickling cherry flowers
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Onistura's Cherry Flowers.
Beautiful imagery and very well penned :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Gracy :-)
DeleteCool to think of them tickling the petals. Fine work, this.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ron :-)
DeleteLovely cascading haiku ~ creates a divine feeling of Spring ~ Enjoy ^_^
ReplyDeleteThanks Carol :-)
Deletenicely penned, Speck!
ReplyDeleteThank You Adriana :-)
DeleteI so love this poem, really wish I could write poetry , I tried on my last blog would value your comments
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Tracy :-)
DeleteWhat a delightful story penned on spring... I love it Green!
ReplyDeleteThank You Tarun :-)
DeleteBeautifully written; beautiful images!
ReplyDeletebeautiful imagery...i love the way cherry blossoms dance on the breeze....
ReplyDeleteI like those cherry blossoms ~ Nice tercets ~
ReplyDeleteLovely cascade of petals... very nice
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
DeleteI love those "tickling flowers!"
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :-)
DeleteWow Speck, what a lovely bouquet of haikus! Love how you tied them all together so beautifully. Spring raining love really made me smile, touched my heart--wonderful :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
Deleteoverwhelmed by the lovely, almost magical images your words have painted!
ReplyDeleteSuch lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteThank You Madeleine :-)
DeleteBeautifully written...
ReplyDeleteThanks Mani :-)
Deletealoha Green Speck. i particularly like the way your third ku works in this set. it engages the reader's mind rather than telling me. i like that. aloha.
ReplyDeleteThank You so much
DeleteMy reaction:
ReplyDelete" ... in search of nectar
they swim across the petals
tickling cherry flowers" Awww :D
You always make me smile with your comments :-)
DeletePerfection!
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteSpring raining love, Ah the very image is beautiful...Wonderfully woven poetry GS!!
ReplyDeleteStark imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteDelicate as the cherry blossoms
ReplyDeleteThank you
Peace,
Siggi
Thanks Siggi :-)
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