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green paradise
blooms outside my window
in lap of silence
in lap of silence
serene footprints reside
a smiling monk
a smiling monk
meditates with birds
green paradise
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem - Haru ta (Spring paddy fields).
The photo and the lines written below are beautiful but i don't quite understand to which context does it point to, no offence.
ReplyDeleteWell I just tried to portray the serenity of paddy fields in spring ... hope you like it :-)
DeleteWell, I am new to your blog threfore,couldn't make out what your writing still is. The good thing i now I do and I love it. You've just found another admirer :)
DeleteThanks so much :-)
Deletewwwowww...the lines were awsum...!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful picture..
I like the image of a monk meditating amidst this lush greenery.
ReplyDeleteFieldwork
Thanks MMT :-)
DeleteA green paradise sounds nice right now - it snowed here again soday haha.
ReplyDeleteIt never snows at my place :-)
DeleteBeautiful one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
Deletea lovely serene set ^^
ReplyDeleteThank You kz :-)
Deletefeelings of peace in this lovely set....the lush greenness you describe soothes....
ReplyDeleteit would be quite a field for meditating/ you give it that peace
ReplyDeleteThank You Leslie :-)
DeleteThe monk will enjoy the goodness of quiet natural landscape of greenery! Great cascades GS!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeletePeace inducing words!
ReplyDeleteThank You Phoenix :-)
DeleteYour cascades are always a joy to read
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteLovely cascade... I like that monk
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
Deletehi greenie your suite is wonderful. i like the repetition lends more
ReplyDeletemeaning and sweet rhythm.
Thanks Paige :-)
DeleteLove the picture & the haiku of course :D Where do you find these green paddy fields in the cities??
ReplyDeleteI don't find them anywhere :-( I just used the pic from net !!!
DeleteI love the tranquil serenity in this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a beautifully peaceful poem. I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mary :-)
DeleteAnother lovely, peaceful cascade. Love the smiling monk! I swear I wrote this before seeing Bjorn's comment.
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie :-)
Deletegreat set, speck!
ReplyDeleteThank You Adriana :-)
Deletethe picture is a treat to the eyes and your poetry music to the ears :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteLove `lap of silence'. Another beautiful set from a master.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
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