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A dance a day
Keeps you merry and gay
Showing you the way
Just move and sway.
Sing to your hip
Smile on your lip
Sail with the ship
Yeah, musical trip.
Browse the rhythm
Tune, you fathom
Burn your atom
Through multi-layered stratum.
A dance a day
Keeps you merry and gay
Showing you the way
Just move and sway.
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thats sweet....:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ratika :-)
Delete...and your words danced in rhythm here... dancing can make one feel young... forever young... smiles... enjoyed it!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kelvin :-)
DeleteI could feel the movements when reading. A catchy and lively thing that keeps one's toes tapping. Love it! Nicely GS!
ReplyDeleteHank
Love it, i can feel my feet moving to the sound of your words :0
ReplyDeleteThank You Alan :-)
DeleteThis makes me want to get up and dance. Maybe I should it might just Cheer me up.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bo :-)
Deletehaha i think it def would keep you limber and alive..i enjoy the dance....that is for sure...smiles....really nice rhythm
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteAnd really you cannot help feeling good when you dance! There IS something about the music and the movement. Enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-)
DeleteI'm dancing to the rhythm. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Celstine :-)
DeleteI like the rhythm here...good dancing piece :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Grace :-)
DeleteRhythm feels like 'rap' to me ~ well penned ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
DeleteI agree. Dancing is wonderful medicine for the heart and soul... body, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Laurie :-)
Deletevery nice,,,,
ReplyDeleteeach of the word of the poem are dancing with joy :)
Thank You Shivnath :-)
Delete...dancing, lyrical rhythm, this poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret :-)
DeleteIndeed...dancing is refreshing and delightful.Fantastic piece, Speck!
ReplyDeleteThank You Panchali Di :-)
DeleteFantastic -- really enjoyed the sway!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabio :-)
DeleteSo are you a dancer? Or a writer about dancers?
DeleteNaah ... I just write whatever comes to my mind :-D
DeleteDancing is such a freeing act that involves all of our being. And there are so many ways to express yourself.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Victoria :-)
DeleteYaa i love dancing ;]
ReplyDeleteMe too :-)
DeleteGreat job and fun poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Katy :-)
Deletenow that's what I call a peppy number :) sheer joyous read GS:)
ReplyDeleteA mid-week "happy dance"!
ReplyDeleteThanks McGuffy :-)
DeleteA happy dance,,,rhythm and no blues :-) Good stuff,,GS
ReplyDeleteLet it rip! Good rhythm this! Gives me happy feet.
ReplyDeleteThanks Unknowngnome :-)
DeleteHow come your words are in so much rhythm that they make the reader feel like dancing with every word...outstanding :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sadia :-)
DeleteThis does make me feel like dancing! I like the way the lines had rhyme without seeming to stretch for it. Thanks for visiting my blog too!
ReplyDeleteThank You Peggy :-)
DeleteA nice poem, G.S. ~~ It reminds me of former days when I was young and did (and able to) aerobics three times a week. "Just do it!"
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You can still do it now Jim :-)
Deletestirring rhymes Amrit ! Havent seen you penning down rhymed ones often . This one is equally splendid :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Maliny :-)
Deletebrilliant, I'd love to sing this at my toddler group :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Emma ... that would really make me feel special :-)
DeleteA dance a day can definitely do your soul good...and this felt good to read!
ReplyDeleteThank You Jennifer :-)
Deletenicely done....thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteThanks Wayne :-)
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