In my country there are pine and poplars ... and that's it ... just too cold for others to survive the brutal winters ... sometime a birch tree tries but not for long ... Am I that birch tree in your life, Mr.G ... there for a little while ... then not anymore ... I miss yoy and your comments, Mr.G ... (no pressure though, just saying that I miss you ... I'll light another cigarette, I play some more with my cat ... hat ever) ... but I miss you ... Always, cat.
all the haiku on the pine tree is better than the best..ur imagination is incredible..Mountain pine staring at the flying bird u have very well personified the pine tree..happy Easter dear Speck :)God<3U
aloha Green Speak. i particularly like the last ku here. i like the multiple ways i can read it. the idea of a wander having adventures with a pine and telling about it. or simply telling his adventures to the pine. either way—fun. aloha.
nice one...!!:)
ReplyDeleteHmm.. refreshing! The scent of pine is refreshing anyway and this haiku is, too! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ashna :-)
DeleteI feel very much like your weary traveler this morning. I just wish there were a pine tree here in the desert to listen to my woes!
ReplyDeleteBeneath the Pine Tree
Thanks MMT ... I hope your weariness gets away soon :-)
Deletenice one , nice capture too
ReplyDeleteThank You Ali :-)
Deletethe trees have no choice but to listen though i like to imagine they dont mind...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian :-)
Delete"weary traveler
ReplyDeleteshares his adventures
with old pine"
Oh my! This is so touching. ^_^
Thank You Vaishali :-)
DeleteI love the different directions you took each stanza in. Enjoyable read thismorning.
ReplyDeleteAll the really nice but i personally liked the first one more..:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Mani :-)
DeleteI really like the different takes on this old pine tree. My favourite is the third.
ReplyDeleteIn my country there are pine and poplars ... and that's it ... just too cold for others to survive the brutal winters ... sometime a birch tree tries but not for long ... Am I that birch tree in your life, Mr.G ... there for a little while ... then not anymore ... I miss yoy and your comments, Mr.G ... (no pressure though, just saying that I miss you ... I'll light another cigarette, I play some more with my cat ... hat ever) ... but I miss you ... Always, cat.
ReplyDeleteI am so sorry for this absence Cat ... have been real busy with work and other stuffs ... I will visit your blog soon :-) Take care my friend !!!
Deletewhere would the tree go if it had wings? It should stay right where it is, and listen to that traveler's tales...
ReplyDeleteYou never know :-)
DeleteOh the last one is breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteThis triple hiku really like, great!
ReplyDeleteThank You Leovi :-)
DeleteI do believe I would run in mortal terror if a pine tree ever sprouted wings and began to fly!
ReplyDeleteSeductive Pine
Ha ha ... it would indeed be scary :D
DeleteWow! Lovely set! I enjoyed 2nd and 3rd more! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
Deleteall the haiku on the pine tree is better than the best..ur imagination is incredible..Mountain pine staring at the flying bird u have very well personified the pine tree..happy Easter dear Speck :)God<3U
ReplyDeleteThank You Adhi ... May you have a great Easter too :-)
DeleteThis poem makes me feel so nostalgic.
ReplyDeleteI guess it will make you smile :-)
Deletealoha Green Speak. i particularly like the last ku here. i like the multiple ways i can read it. the idea of a wander having adventures with a pine and telling about it. or simply telling his adventures to the pine. either way—fun. aloha.
ReplyDeleteThanks buddy :-)
DeleteBeautifully expressed.I so love the third one..Very emotive:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Panchali Di :-)
Deleteloved all three. Very different take those were. The deep meaning stands out though the haiku was implicit. Good work :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Maliny :-)
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