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Wrapped in velvet paper
That shone against her misty pearls
He gifted her moments
Of promises and joy.
She unwrapped the box
And out flew the stars
Playing with time
As silvery moon descended
On their valley of love.
Wings sprouted
And among the clouds they walked
Hand in hand
Moments re-captured
A lasting hope
Of togetherness.
Moments are to be shared
Moments are to be blessed
Savor the past, present and all
'Cause moments aren't to be chased.
Moments are smiles
And a few drops of tears
Moments teach us to live
As we learn to win over our fears.
This Poem is shared with One Single Impression - Moment.
Wouldn't it be nice if we could gift wrap our precious moments in order to be saved and re-opened at a later time? I loved the metaphorical nature of this.
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful composition!
ReplyDeleteMoments constitute Life!
Thank You Simran :-)
DeleteShe unwrapped the box
ReplyDeleteAnd out flew the stars
Playing with time
As silvery moon descended
On their valley of love
Would have loved this to happen all the time. Love were to descend from heaven. Nicely GS!
Hank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteA lovely poem, GS,,we do save our moments in our memories,,may we savour the most precious as your poem bids us to do,,,
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteIt would have made a hell lot of sense if I was reading this in right frame of mind, may be some other time, some other day...:)
ReplyDeleteI hope you are ok !!!
DeleteBeautiful words...I love your poem!
ReplyDeleteIt has a graceful ease about it~
:D
Thanks Ella :-)
DeleteOh, this is beautiful. Respecting each moment.
ReplyDeleteThank You Harshad Ji :-)
DeleteThis is so so beautifully composed. Especially, the first part, I love that one.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank You Vanessa :-)
DeleteI love your words in this! Brilliant!
ReplyDeleteThanks Bo :-)
DeleteYou write love so honestly. It feels very natural.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ben :-)
DeleteWe live in a world of broken images... your poetic thoughts transport me to a dream land of color and substance. Great lines...:))
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchali Di :-)
DeleteBeautiful words, Green Speck.
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteADORE the last stanza! It could stand alone. Nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, G.S. This lady (and the couple as well) had her precious moments that he gave. She enjoyed them fully and lived in the full every moment given. Don't we wish we could have this experience?
ReplyDeleteThank you, G.S, you did wonderfully with the prompt.
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We would all love to live in the beautiful moments of life :-)
Deleteabsolutely true. each moment is a treasure on its own. ah. life is beautiful
ReplyDeleteThanks Totomai :-)
DeleteThank You Loredana :-)
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