"within deep rooted abyss" There's something magical and mysterious among the depths... so many layer, possibilities. No one really knows what is hiding there.
...sings long lost songs --- i like that... and maybe this time she'll sing her songs with more love & joy than the last... sing thru your soul & heart and not just by our mouth alone... smiles...
I love the images in this. Wonderful combination of words! I will have to look up shadorma as I am not familiar with so many poetry forms. The photo goes with this elegantly.
Well captured and very elegant. It has an almost 'Brooke' feel to it. The beauty is that it can be viewed from many perspectives. Well done
ReplyDeleteThanks Alan :-)
Deletewhat is shadorma?? N when do you work? :p
ReplyDeleteHa ha ... I work when I don't write :-P
Delete"within deep rooted abyss" There's something magical and mysterious among the depths... so many layer, possibilities. No one really knows what is hiding there.
ReplyDeleteIt's tough to decipher what lies beneath !!!
DeleteBeautiful shadorma with a mystery,maybe spiritual.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
Delete..how well u have written about reflection with every line reflecting Ur depth of imagination in the pursuit of excellence ..great writing yar..GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteThank You Adhi :-)
Deletenice...like the form...and while i like the reflection, it is that last line that gets me...her still singing those songs...lovely bit of poetry...
ReplyDeleteThe lines are intricate and beautiful Amrit !
ReplyDeleteThank You Maliny :-)
Deletebeautiful, full of depth and emotion. that's great writing, Speck!
ReplyDeleteThanks Adriana :-)
DeleteBeautifully written shadorma here!
ReplyDelete...sings long lost songs --- i like that... and maybe this time she'll sing her songs with more love & joy than the last... sing thru your soul & heart and not just by our mouth alone... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin :-)
DeleteLovely poem. What an unexpected direction you took with the final line.
ReplyDeleteThank You Laurie :-)
DeleteOh I love that last line my friend. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
Delete...she sings long lost songs ~ Wonderful ~ very pensive haiku ~ Enjoy ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
DeleteAmazing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Momina :-)
DeleteVery elegantly written, very creative.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is simply magical .....
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :-)
Deletereflections and associated mysteries..
ReplyDeleteso much to think upon..
Siren songs. I like this!
ReplyDeleteI love the images in this. Wonderful combination of words! I will have to look up shadorma as I am not familiar with so many poetry forms. The photo goes with this elegantly.
ReplyDeleteThank You Peggy :-)
DeleteI like those long lost songs...
ReplyDeleteThanks Gerry :-)
DeleteI wish I could write so precisely and beautifully as you do :-)
ReplyDeleteOh God ... you write like a million diamonds :D
Deleteyes she sings but it's a sad song and no one to hear her
ReplyDeleteYes !!!
DeleteThat's very beautiful, speck! Writing a Shadorma is tough...but, you wrote this elegant piece so effortlessly...Kudos!
ReplyDeleteThanks Panchali Di :-)
DeleteBeautiful piece dear :)
ReplyDeletelovely lines GS!! Thanks to you, I learnt about a new form of poetry today- Shadorma.
ReplyDeleteI am glad I could be of help :-)
DeleteGood form and words ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Loredana :-)
ReplyDeleteExquisite
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteBeautifully crafted!:)
ReplyDeleteThis is a lovely and haunting poem, GS. I especially love the last two lines for I have been there.
ReplyDeleteNow I know what a shardoma is - thanks! Sometimes tinted glass can help make reflections feel safer!
ReplyDeleteThank You Robyn :-)
Deletelovely poem....deep one too...
ReplyDeleteMesmerizing and magical!
ReplyDeleteThank You Phoenix :-)
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