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O gentle breeze
will you sing to her
my hymns of love
roses dance
swirl with the breeze
smile and laugh
morning breeze
knocks at my window
carrying a new sun
she whispers
enchanting breeze
clock strikes twelve
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Breeze.
there is a bit of magic in thinking the breeze carries the messages of love...hoping that clock strike is not ominous...
ReplyDeleteThe clock strike could perhaps be an indication of love :-)
DeleteNice one. Leaves a feeling as if many stories are untold..
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Thanks Anu :-)
DeleteLovely and mysterious, Mr.G ...
ReplyDeleteThank You Cat :-)
DeleteLoved the first one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Adriana :-)
DeleteLove all these. I can just see the roses swirling and smiling in the breeze.
ReplyDeleteThank You Tigerbrite :-)
DeleteA breeze carrying love's message from one soul to the next...
ReplyDeleteawww..nice breeze!
ReplyDeleteThank You Dark Angel :-)
DeleteBeautiful set! :) Loved the first one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteVERY VERY nice set of haiku. Seems like it was a breeze for you to write them.
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
DeleteYour words are simply beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bo :-)
Deletewonderful set GS, loved the roses swirling in the breeze...Isn't it lovely to hear hymns of love from the breeze?
ReplyDeleteIt's always a sweet melody :-)
DeleteYou have me thinking of how things change so dramatically by the intense light of day. Morning is full of promise.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy :-)
DeleteI can visualize morning breeze carrying sun, how lovely!
ReplyDeleteLovely set, Green Speck
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
DeleteWhat a delicate and romantic breeze you evoked in your poem!
ReplyDeleteThank You WabiSabi :-)
DeleteJust cut an paste Wabi's comment here. ;-) I also thought "delicate and romantic" when I read this. You really have the touch for haiku.
ReplyDeleteThanks Alice :-)
DeleteFull of beautiful feelings!
ReplyDeleteWhen you hear that knocking at your window, do you jump from bed and greet it with joy, or do you burrow deeper under the covers?
ReplyDeleteNo Ruffling Breeze
Thanks MMT :-)
DeleteAhh... a Cinderella story. Romantic. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thank You Eliz :-)
DeleteSoulful.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
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