ur figure of speech is excellent..whether similes or metaphors..I loved the way u compare the kite to birds & stars..yar u do it very well.Kite is one of my favourite toy & generations to come will also enjoy playing Kite.speck warmest wishes for ur published poem..GOD<3U
Very beautiful pieces, Speck. Visual images that you've created are fabulous!!!...clap clap!
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Thank You so much Panchali Di :-)
Deletebeautiful, Speck!
ReplyDeleteThanks Adriana :-)
DeleteTakes me back in childhood.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I like the way you compared kites to both birds and stars; and yes, it would be a gift indeed if a 'star' landed on one's roof! Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the awesome piece you wrote........
ReplyDeleteWow ... thanks so much buddy :-)
DeleteColourful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Lothar :-)
DeleteI shall join the children and applaud...great duo
ReplyDeleteThanks for the applause Ma'am :-)
Deleteur figure of speech is excellent..whether similes or metaphors..I loved the way u compare the kite to birds & stars..yar u do it very well.Kite is one of my favourite toy & generations to come will also enjoy playing Kite.speck warmest wishes for ur published poem..GOD<3U
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Adhi :-)
DeleteKites as falling stars...lovely!
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Thank You MMT :-)
DeleteLove the idea of kites joining other beautiful features of those upper dimensions!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :-)
DeleteReally love the second one. So delicate and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Maggie :-)
DeleteLove the gift of smiles.
ReplyDeletereally magical imagery in these....the comparisons are tight...and def anthing to spread smiles...smiles.
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteVery magical set of haiku. Flying with kites and a fallen star as gift, mysterious ... answer of the gods?
ReplyDeletePerhaps the answer we all seek :-)
Deletealoha Green Speck. i like the connection you make between birds and kites in the sky. cool.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much :-)
DeleteGreat set of haiku ....love the 'gifts of smiles'. ^_^
ReplyDeleteThank You Carol :-)
Deletewonderful haiku...both of them..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mani :-)
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