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she digs out his heart
with a spade
a queen
controlling the king
possesses the powers
and the secret card
what story it guards
her gaze mysterious
silent
and yet it commands
authority so royal
an empire shall bow
to this enigma
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good one :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anmol :-)
DeleteOh I loved this one . . . . I was laughing so hard at the opening:
ReplyDeleteShe digs out his Heart with a Spade!!! . . . . priceless
No doubt he was a bit of a Jack the lad she Clubbed him first
And stole all his Diamonds.
You are a bit of a Joker and I thought this was Ace.
But then I read it again and got the mistique that followed
Loved it.
Nice to meet you ~ Eddie
Thank You Eddie :-)
Deletegood one...it wa slike taka tak taka tak...poetry flew in words and words added to picture
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Thanks Ekta :-)
DeleteIf anything could conquer a king, it is the power of the heart...
ReplyDeleteTrue :-)
Deletean empire shall bow to this enigma-beauty and intrinsic evocative loveliness-it has power and reaches me
ReplyDeleteThanks Hala :-)
Deleteshe who controls the heart of the king, controls the kingdom...
ReplyDeleteVery true words Brian :-)
DeleteShe probably had her reasons ... maybe he watched porn or drank or something ...
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha :D Perhaps ;-)
DeleteSharp and skillful. Quite enjoyable...
ReplyDeleteThanks Berowne :-)
DeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteThank You Cait :-)
DeleteSo good, Amrit. Sometimes we men won't admit how much power women have over us!!
ReplyDeleteIn my Bible I carry a picture I drew af a heart with an arrow through it. It is captioned "Arlene stole my heart."
Every now and then I find it and show her (Mrs. Jim). She beams and blushes slightly. I love her still, after 41 years of being married.
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Aweee that's so sweeet!!
DeleteWow ... that's so lovely :D
Deleteah..women!! You just made me feel supreme :P
ReplyDeleteI am honored :-)
DeleteNice words! i am feeling a bit more powerful now :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ankita :-)
Delete:D
ReplyDeleteThank You Shalet :-)
DeleteBrilliantly expressed.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteThis is a wow!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Belva :-)
DeleteThe Queen of hearts takes it all! Sharp and powerful write!
ReplyDeleteThank You Aditi :-)
DeleteTrue...wonderfully expressed.
ReplyDeleteThanks Janaki :-)
Deletepowerful write!
ReplyDeleteThank You so much :-)
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