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A slow waltz tonight,
Naughty waves tickle my feet,
Dancing with the moon.
Memories whisper,
Sliding under white linen,
Waltzing with the corpse.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Waltz.
Nice take on the prompt !
ReplyDeleteTake Care
Thanks Fatima :-)
DeleteInteresting one ... very well executed ..!!
ReplyDeleteThank You Anu :-)
DeleteVery romantic!!! Loved it.. esp naughty waves tickling feet and sliding under the white linen!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Pranita :-)
DeleteOh my! This is an eerie one.
ReplyDeleteYou compose the most dreamy haiku .........
ReplyDeleteThanks Helen :-)
DeleteLove that second one!
ReplyDeleteThank You Mama Zen :-)
DeleteReally magical, beautiful waltz with the moon.
ReplyDeleteThanks Leovi :-)
DeleteWonderful set. The 1st is my favorite espescially the last line. Dancing in the moon.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kristjaan :-)
DeleteThese present such a contrast. The second one is haunting, and it's my favorite.
ReplyDeleteThanks Patti :-)
DeleteOoooooooo second one is spooooooooooooky.
ReplyDeleteThank You Judith :-)
DeleteOh my!! You set me up for romance in the first, then BAM a surprise! A tale with a twist in 6 lines! Love it!
ReplyDeleteWow, these are special,,,,my favourite is the first one with "dancing with the moon"
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteBeautiful haiku set, Green! But taken aback at the ending. Somewhat morbid to me. Nicely!
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Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteMakes me think of all the beautiful options....
ReplyDeleteThank You Sandy :-)
DeleteBeautiful and romantic, though the second one has some morbid undertones. very well written
ReplyDeleteMaybe waltzing with a dead love...?
ReplyDeleteThe moon will never abandon you, but she is far and has many lovers.
I like all the lines, but my favourite line is this one:
Sliding under white linen, so deep, so real, so...
From dreams to reality, again.
:)
you are amazing .........such wonderful thoughts.....
ReplyDeletevery nice expression..
ReplyDeleteThank You Ruchi :-)
Deletewaltzing with a corpse...amazing!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
Deleteglad to have finally caught on to your meaning for #2... the 'obvious' interpretation is slightly macarbre!
ReplyDeletegreat haiku!
Thanks Whistlingninja :-)
DeleteGreat set, I love especially the second, which is very dark indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank You Brudberg :-)
DeleteOh! Very different! Romance and darkness married and waltzing together :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jolly :-)
DeleteI'd like to be a dancing partner to the naught waves!
ReplyDeleteWilderness Waltz
That would be fun :-)
Deletewaltzing with the corpse? man! How could you think of something like that? It reminded me of lady gaga's bad romance!
ReplyDeleteI just thought :-) Thanks for such beautiful comment :-)
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