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childhood floats
through bubble ring, and now
just a memory
just a memory
of innocent giggles, and laughs
lost somewhere
lost somewhere
in humdrums of monotony
childhood sinks
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Childhood is the most beautiful of all life's seasons and ur lines r beautiful..Green speck smiles:))
ReplyDeleteThanks Adhi :-)
Deletesuch splendid memories... :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Apurva :-)
DeleteChildhood is the most pleasant phase of one's life. but it passes off in a jiffy.............
ReplyDeleteYes :-)
DeleteLike how each verse is connected.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sakshi :-)
DeleteOh dude! How can you do this every single time. Fantastic!
ReplyDeleteI might stop visiting your page soon, for the complex it gives me.
Ooops ... please don't stop :p
DeleteIn hum drums of monotony, childhood sinks! Amazing Amrit! I have no words.
ReplyDeleteMy Papa will say, detergent is not good for health and he never let us buy one. It was during my dating that i first bought my bubble ring ;p
ReplyDeleteMy new post is here, BTW, http://sinhasat302.blogspot.in/2014/05/sports-and-my-reflections-atozchallenge.html
Chalo atleast you had it :p
DeleteLost indeed...but relived here through ur words.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteThis is achingly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI still go crazy over these soap bubbles. ^_^
They are always fun to play with :-)
DeleteInteresting chain of Haiku.. Amrit.. Well done..
ReplyDeleteI am here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/a-distant-home-haiku.html
RS
Thanks Sir :-)
DeleteOne of my favorite childhood memories was playing with these bubbles for hours on end. It was especially fun on windy days!
ReplyDeleteI agree. Those were the best times :-)
Deletelovely childhood haiku
ReplyDeletenot only childhood our whole life is like those bubbles only floating for a while...nice reflection..
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
Deletethe repeated lines works well here
ReplyDeleteThanks :-)
Deleteno.....dont let childhood sink..
ReplyDeletewe let it go far too easy in our rush to grow up
Exactly, and in the way we loose our moments so quickly.
DeleteI "see" little people around the world wh have no childhood.
ReplyDeleteThey have so little--seems to me--they have
NOT EVEN A CHILDHOOD TO LOSE.
That's sad Steve, really sad. But the world is a cruel place.
DeleteThis set of haiku has a beautiful flow. It's been a while since I thought about those irredescent bubbles!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gabrielle :-)
DeleteLove the way you have repeated the lines! :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Pooja :-)
DeleteLove the repetition and flow in this. Nostalgic for my own childhood now.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathryn :-)
DeleteWhat a wonderful Haiku Triptych!
ReplyDeleteThank You Kim :-)
DeleteThe cascade adds the perfect touch of nostalgia Amrit....I miss those soap bubbles,, sigh!!
ReplyDeleteWe all miss those days :-(
Deletefluid and then melancholy. well penned ~
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteChildhood passes in a blink....sad we lose the wonder....great write
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie :-)
DeleteA beautiful picture created by you in the mind. Reminds of childhood days.
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteMade me feel sad...
ReplyDeleteAnd nostalgic
Aah be happy :p
DeleteI love the imagery you created! Pure innocence and fun♥
ReplyDeletenostalgic !
ReplyDeleteThank You :-)
DeleteNice. Makes me want to get some, the really giant bubbles. What memories. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteYou said soo much using merely any words . One of your besst haikus . How dyu do this ? Penning down each haiku better than the previous one . How ?
ReplyDeleteOops ... just happens :p
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