Sunday, November 04, 2012

Live Your Life And Love Your Life

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Live Your Life
Love Your Life
Break The Swords
Burn The Knives

'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right

False Depths Of Despair
A Guide To Tumultuous Shore
Rotten Evil's Plan
To Scramble Your Core

Illustrate The Charm
Being Upbeat Is The Key
Sallow Wrath Your Foe
Disguised Wanderer Free

Happiness Flees Fast
Elusive Gift Of God
Swelling Pain Hurts
Enable Dreams Broad

Dreams Of Joy
A Smiling Ray
The Sun Now Coy
The Moon Comes To Play

And Thus I Say ...

Live Your Life
Love Your Life
Break The Swords
Burn The Knives

'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
That You Got To Fight
It's A Subtle Moment
To Eliminate Wrong From Right


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58 comments:

  1. WoW! Bravo such a lovely poem, it got so well with Live your life, your blog title. We really should break the swords to breathe our heart out. Perfect composition, :D Take care !

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  2. You got them all covered with this. I guess with all things, we have to know the bad side, to recognise the good.
    Great poem

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  3. I completely agree with you on this one, Just like you, I feel that Life isn't a battle that we got to fight, rather its a collection of subtle moments to be felt deeply and rejoiced....I also feel and I do agree that we should eliminate the wrong from the right, although we have our own definition of right and wrong , still...I always want to do good and be in the right path. Really,its a great tribute to the name of your blog, which is perhaps the essence of your life too .
    have a wonderful day !

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  4. I love the cadence that rolls through the piece. A little yin yang at play. Well done.

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  5. Great job! Beautiful writing!

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  6. What a powerful piece with an uplifting message...

    'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
    That You Got To Fight
    It's A Subtle Moment
    To Eliminate Wrong From Right

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  7. That is an amazing poem...life is indeed not a battle but all about relishing what comes in the moment ...beautifully expressed :)

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  8. Love the pulse that beats in this piece. And I love the repetition of these two powerful stanzas:
    "Live Your Life
    Love Your Life
    Break The Swords
    Burn The Knives

    'Cause Life Ain't A Battle
    That You Got To Fight
    It's A Subtle Moment
    To Eliminate Wrong From Right"

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  9. Aah this poem is full of passion..using words..to breathe..to live..Jae

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  10. great poem and words to live by - live your life, love your life!

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  11. Powerful advice... especially:

    Illustrate The Charm
    Being Upbeat Is The Key

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  12. Brilliant Work.
    Such a beautiful way of looking at Life.
    Love the rhyme scheme.
    The best part is where you portray life as nothing but elimination of wrong from right.
    Keep writing, people like you will add to the glory of literature. :)

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  13. This is awesome. So many prompts in one single poem is an amazement for me. This poem is like a theme-poem of your blog :)

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  14. Well you definitely hit a bulls-eye with this all encompassing poem today.

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  15. very philosophical poem ~ well penned and great inspiration ~ (A Creative Harbor) ^_^

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  16. This shows your versatility, speck! awesome...

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  17. clever use of words and a positive message as well.

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  18. Great poem. Being optimistic is the key.

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  19. Great message. The repeating of the first stanza at the end makes it come full circle. Nicely done.

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  20. Great poem and message, I hope you love your life, I love your poem.

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  21. I love this!! Excellent use of the words and such a powerful, perfect message. :-)

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  22. 'Break The Swords
    Burn The Knives'

    I loved these lines, I wish world could live that way...

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  23. You make it look easy - Great post!

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  24. I particularly like the repeated refrain, and felt the ebbing and flowing of emotion and perspective that inevitably occur over a lifetime.

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  25. I am struggling to write a good thought on this poem, this is one of a kind and unique poem I have ever read. I loved it, thanks for writing :)

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  26. Unique, beautiful. It gave me great enjoyment.

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  27. woww...so many prompts and such a beautiful poem...that too with a good message..
    Great job Amrit!

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