You might want to consider linking this over at Poets United today. Kim's "Verse First" prompt is "icy" and this would fit there as well.
Wow ... I would love to do that ... thanks Mary :-)
sweet:D
Thank You Aishwariya :-)
Vivid imagery.
Thanks Keith :-)
So tender and poignant,,love it,,
Thank You Ellecee :-)
Great haiku! :-)
Thanks Jennifer :-)
Lovely! ^^
Wow lovely :)Sorry I'm reading after long, just got busy and had no time to drop by.Take Care
Thanks Fatima :-)
This one is a gem, Amrit! exquisite!
Wow ... thanks Meenakshi :-)
Wow! Sensually sweet
Thank You Celestine :-)
Nice one ~
Wonderful!
Thank You Lisa :-)
A huge fan of small stones and the power they contain, I am thrilled I read this one. Big meanings, little verses. You nailed it.
Thanks Kim :-)
oo very nice, evocative...the melting ice has a few meanings i think...
Thank You Brian :-)
Well done...I love how you did this!I love how huge your message is!:D
Awww the tenderness just melts one's heart...
You have captured a sweet moment:)
Thanks Sherry :-)
Wow! OK, this is much too short for such a scene. I want more! :)
Well, I would surely try for more next time :-)
I like. She sips her sorrow.
Thanks Susan :-)
This is so cute!!
You say so much in so few words.
Thanks Rosemary :-)
Lovely imagination.
Thanks a lot :-)
You've got it as a gift Amrit... Saying a lot in lesser possible words :) Kudos!
I am glad you feel so :-)
Thanks :-)
You might want to consider linking this over at Poets United today. Kim's "Verse First" prompt is "icy" and this would fit there as well.
ReplyDeleteWow ... I would love to do that ... thanks Mary :-)
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ReplyDeleteThank You Aishwariya :-)
DeleteVivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
DeleteSo tender and poignant,,love it,,
ReplyDeleteThank You Ellecee :-)
DeleteGreat haiku! :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jennifer :-)
DeleteLovely! ^^
ReplyDeleteWow lovely :)
ReplyDeleteSorry I'm reading after long, just got busy and had no time to drop by.
Take Care
Thanks Fatima :-)
DeleteThis one is a gem, Amrit! exquisite!
ReplyDeleteWow ... thanks Meenakshi :-)
DeleteWow! Sensually sweet
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
DeleteNice one ~
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteThank You Lisa :-)
DeleteA huge fan of small stones and the power they contain, I am thrilled I read this one. Big meanings, little verses. You nailed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kim :-)
Deleteoo very nice, evocative...the melting ice has a few meanings i think...
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteWell done...I love how you did this!
ReplyDeleteI love how huge your message is!
:D
Awww the tenderness just melts one's heart...
ReplyDeleteYou have captured a sweet moment:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry :-)
DeleteWow! OK, this is much too short for such a scene. I want more! :)
ReplyDeleteWell, I would surely try for more next time :-)
DeleteI like. She sips her sorrow.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :-)
DeleteThis is so cute!!
ReplyDeleteYou say so much in so few words.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rosemary :-)
DeleteLovely imagination.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
DeleteYou've got it as a gift Amrit... Saying a lot in lesser possible words :) Kudos!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you feel so :-)
DeleteThanks :-)
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