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children in school
brag about adventures
teacher smiles
his icy stare
scared the playing children
they run back home
polite words
she tells them stories
children love her
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Altho I have no kids, I do like them, and your delightful trio made me smile!
ReplyDeleteThanks Joanne :-)
DeleteChildren are the true joy of our world.
ReplyDeleteI agree :-)
DeleteThis is cute and creepy all at the same time :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Raajii :-)
DeleteChildren are one of life's most precious gifts.
ReplyDeleteVery true :-)
Deletecute haiku!!
ReplyDeleteThankyou so much amrik for your lovely comments on way2express ... hey your blog is approved by google adsense ,,it's great ..:)
Thanks Anu :-)
DeleteOkay. Let me admit. Anything related to children is sweet and has innocence, which automatically tugs at the heart.
ReplyDeleteLovely little things here, Amrit. :D
Thank You Vaishali :-)
DeleteMy experience was slightly different ... lovely stories from teachers ... icy stares from parents ... forgive me, if I misinterpreted your peom, Mr. G?
ReplyDeleteYou interpreted correctly Cat :-)
DeleteCute one buddy :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
Deletechildren are mirrors
ReplyDeleteof how grown up treat them
sowing seeds of war.
Love your poetry
Thank You Bjorn :-)
Deletefirst and last part were lovely, second part made me hold my breath! loved it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bo :-)
DeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteExcellent. I love the way you combined two prompts to create a wonderful poem... :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Thanks Eliz :-)
DeleteWow! These are well done.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sandy :-)
DeleteThat's clever, drawing on two prompts and using the three words so deftly.
ReplyDeleteVery well done!
Thanks Meenakshi :-)
Deleteinnocently beautiful...made me remember my school days...though we hardly got scared when the teacher rolled her eyes...lol:D
ReplyDeleteThank You Aishwariya :-)
Deleteawww..cute :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Dark Angel :-)
DeleteWonderful trio on children.
ReplyDeleteThank You Kristjaan :-)
DeleteCute pic ,beautiful words,innocent children..
ReplyDeleteThanks Odyzz :-)
DeleteImmaculate pieces! Each one flowed so effortlessly, speck! You're a genius!!:)
ReplyDeleteWow ... am flying high now :-)
DeletePhew, 'his icy stare', scares me too. He must be a stalker. Thankfully it sounds like the children have got a loving teacher.
ReplyDeleteMy 3WW is HERE
Loving teachers are always needed in a child's life :-)
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