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shepherd's flute
goats sing along
music of the heath
shepherd's flute
she listens, hidden
smile of the heath
shepherd's flute
clouds embrace the sun
glory of the heath
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Heath.
Nice one! Today, This is what I experienced today. It's normal to have shepherds in my village and I love it!
ReplyDeleteSorry about writing today two times. Lol.
DeleteHa ha ... that's fine ... thanks for reading :)
DeleteThe sounds of a flute out in the open is more mesmerizing. That is true GS!
ReplyDeleteHank
Nicely written. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Ajay :-)
DeleteLovely...this reminds me of the great poet ever, who created immortal shepherd songs in the heath..Tagore!:)
ReplyDeleteOh God .... this is the biggest encouragement a writer can ever have ... thanks so much ... I guess I can't sleep tonight !!!
DeleteVery picturesque.
ReplyDeleteWonder how much longer she is willing to lsten ... after all she is not a sheep ... :)
ReplyDeleteI guess she won't have to wait longer ;-)
DeletePeaceful...serene...beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThanks my friend :-)
Deletei have to think shepherds had a pretty cool life you know....at least i romanticize it a bit....out in the wilds....keeping yourself entertained with music...
ReplyDeletea great combo of adventure and romanticism ... I agree !!!
DeleteThere's something about shepherds that evokes thoughts of leisure and music. soothing lines...
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery and music in the last one :-)
ReplyDeleteThank You Bjorn :-)
DeleteYour words feel like music as I read them,,,what a lovely scene you painted,,,I have always romanticize shepherds too,,,
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee :-)
Deletemusic...smiles...glory---what more could you ask for?
ReplyDeleteThe Heath Was Tamed
And the shepherd played on and on on his flute ... ah that sweet sound resonating over the heath. Wow Green nice set on 'heath'.
ReplyDeleteWow! What a musical haiku, flute in the heath can be celestial.
ReplyDelete....ah, there's something romantic about the life of a shepherd... wonderful haikus here... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThanks Kelvin :-)
Delete...i reminded me of a book by Paulo Coelho, 'The Alchemist'... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThat's in my to-be-read list :-)
DeleteNice one ....loved the music you evoked :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Sadia :-)
DeleteThanks Patrycja :-)
ReplyDeleteMagical and mystical description of the shepherd's life.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful scene, and a lovely refrain :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sara :-)
DeleteBeautiful imagery, Green Speck
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
ReplyDeleteAwesome first verse..thank you..just love it...great take on the prompt, all three verses
ReplyDeleteThanks Siggi :-)
DeleteThat could have been a tough one... Heath. You wrote a great poem there. :-)
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