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on the moon
one angel sings
beautiful love songs
love story
wrapped with promises
faith and trust
the hermit preaches
peace and nirvana
love, a journey
hand in hand
they walk on thorns
love bleeds joy
mother's lullaby
baby smiles in return
story of love
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Love Story.
Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteNicely written. :)
I love the hidden story within your poem.
ReplyDeleteThank You Charleen :-)
DeleteThis poem will warm the heart of all who read it sir. You have a special gift.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sir for such lovely words :-)
DeleteI like the story you have shared... cheers
ReplyDeletenice story of love :)
ReplyDeleteThank You Shivnath :-)
DeleteThanks for sharing magic, Mr. G :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Cat :-)
DeleteBaby smiling into its mother's adoring eyes... such a lovely picture you have left me with today.
ReplyDeleteThank You Laurie :-)
DeleteAh, if there is love, then the lovers can even walk on thorns together. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteShadowy Love Story
That's what love is all about :-)
DeleteLove in all its btfl forms....you portrayed them so well...:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful love story caught in a nicely composed series of haiku. I especially like this one:
ReplyDeletehand in hand
they walk on thorns
love bleeds joy
That's true love.
Thanks Kristjaan :-)
Delete"hand in hand
ReplyDeletethey walk on thorns
love bleeds joy"
Loved these lines....Just awesome! :)
Thank You Valli :-)
DeleteThere can be no love as selfless as that of a mother's. Beautiful piece Green Speck!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sui :-)
DeleteLove can take so many faces, lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank You Meenakshi :-)
DeleteBeautifully captured.
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :-)
Deletesmiles...i like your characters...the hermit...the angel ....the mother...i feel the love in this...
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
DeleteLove is present all around us, we only need to see with our hearts. loved your take on this beautiful emotion.
ReplyDeleteYou write with such beauty.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sara :-)
DeleteBlissful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sreeja :-)
DeleteVery beautiful and heartwarming Haiku
ReplyDeleteThank You Celestine :-)
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