I wait for you
Behind closed doors
Muted agony
Turns to ecstasy
As soon as I am in your arms.
We roll and gallop
Over lusty terrains
Dancing with the birds
And relishing the rain
Let's kiss in delight
Oh, consider my plight
My eyes search for you
Together, we flew.
The volcano shakes
Sings a loud song
Of passion we devoured
We explode and burn
Run, run, run
Nooks and crevices
My world, you traversed.
You gift me this life
Of money and luxuries
But alas, I know
You can never call me your wife
And I lay contented
Resigned to my fate
The darkness emerges
Is it that late?
Won't you come tonight?
Can I not have you in my sight?
My heart aches in your absence
For you I squander away my defense.
I stand by the window
And you would come tonight
We would race against the storm
Untold stories, can they ever be right?
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You killed me with this one...how amazing ...I felt each n every wrd of it...its breathing ..
ReplyDeleteThanks for such a beautiful comment Sadia :-)
DeleteWOW! That expresses a lot :) It is heart touching :)
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Thank You Megha :-)
Deletenow that's breathtaking poetry
ReplyDeleteWow!! such a rhythmic and gentle flow of expressions ...
ReplyDeleteThanks friend :-)
Deletevolcanic, unbound expression of love! You are awesome with romantic poetry!!
ReplyDeleteI am glad :-)
DeleteAn explosion of doubts!
ReplyDeletePerhaps :-)
DeleteThis one seemed to speak of unrequited love...amazing
ReplyDeleteThank You Sir :-)
DeleteWell written.... I think the woman waits in vain!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary :-) I think so too ;-)
DeleteLike the tempo.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rebelle :-)
DeleteQuite remarkable. And quite moving.
ReplyDeleteThank You Berowne :-)
DeleteWow, this image is unlocking the deep rooms in people. A hint of tragedy , thanks Speck
ReplyDeleteThanks Kutamun :-)
DeleteA delightful poem. Yes, this look conveys a lot of sensuality.
ReplyDeleteWe roll and gallop
ReplyDeleteOver lusty terrains
Dancing with the birds
And relishing the rain...ha....so fun...and the erupting volcano....lol...wht an allusion to passion....nicely done...a fun bit of intimacy...
Thanks Brian :-)
DeleteSensual but with subtle darkness.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful as always.
Thank You Arcane :-)
DeleteOh my, this is wonderful,,,so sensual and romantic,,,,you give her some magic moments in an otherwise limited life,,,and you give us the pleasure of reading about them,,,
ReplyDeleteThanks Ellecee :-)
DeleteWonderful work here. I can feel that ache...so well done.
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DeleteWOW!! **applauds**
ReplyDeleteThanks Divya :-)
DeletePowerful and imaginative storytelling with this.
ReplyDeleteThank You Ben :-)
DeleteIntimate and lovely poem!
ReplyDeleteA strong sensual piece, Speck. So well written!
ReplyDeleteThank You ma'am :-)
DeleteA poem full of quick passion and refrained sadness; poor woman resigned to her fate! "Wuthering Heights" came to my mind...
ReplyDeleteMy favorite lines
Nooks and crevices
My world, you traversed.
terrific!
Beautiful image.
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A passionate poem of being the other woman, waiting...
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Thank You Anna :-)
DeleteWonderful write...especially like "muted agony turned to ecstasy"...
ReplyDeleteThanks Tess :-)
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