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we held hands, and lips
promises made yesterday
away, waves swept them
waves swept them, away
yesterday, I lost my love
today, lost myself
This Haiku is shared with Carpe Diem and the Prompt is Yesterday.
Woah....what can be better than this...Good work buddy :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sadia :-)
Deletenice..:)
ReplyDeleteThank You Vandana :-)
DeleteThe end of promises and love relationships is painful and bittersweet -- heartache is tough no matter who (or what)initiates the ending.
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Very true ... but it's all a part of life :-)
DeleteThis is worst one can face... it is really tuf to live without your loved one...
ReplyDeleteBut life moves on :-)
Deletethe first line is AWESOME !! wow
ReplyDeleteI loved the first and last line. Strikingly contrasting and both speak so much. Love lost steals a part of us,which hardly comes back. Though we try to bring it back again, its gone once and forever.
ReplyDeleteIt's difficult to retrieve lost love :-)
DeleteSad, romantic, touching...; you have played wonderfully with words.
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Thanks Dulcina :-)
Deleteheartbreaking... we held hands, and lips-- how lovely ^^
ReplyDeleteThis is melancholy and beautiful at the same time. Masterful.
ReplyDeleteThank You Sir :-)
DeleteIt feels very true.
ReplyDeleteYou ride along with the magic in your words.
Take Care!
The unprecedented master of haiku, beautiful lines expressing lovely emotions. Loosing oneself after loosing your love, such an intense meaning in a haiku, impeccable Greeny :) Amazingly lovely !
ReplyDeleteThank You Tanya :-)
DeleteThings happen .. change happens ... as long as we are alive ... there will be change ... Mr.G.
ReplyDeletePerhaps changes are necessary :-)
DeleteNice. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ajay :-)
DeleteThese are beautiful and so very sad.
ReplyDeleteThe most important thing is to find yourself again.
Cheers!
JzB
Thank You JzB :-)
Deletelove can be so deep that we are in jeopardy of identity theft....the key is to keep looking for yourself
ReplyDeleteVery true Joanne :-)
Deletenot bad..read quite a few of ur haikus....good jaaab!!!!!altho....same theme kinda repetitive hoe jacche na??? :-D anyway...happy new year..
ReplyDeleteHappy New Year Rahul ... perhaps you are right, and that could be due to my laziness :-P kichhu alaada korar try korbo ebaar :-)
Deletebreak the mould dude....Love lost romantic hero wala image ajkal ar oto chole na ;-)not much in vogue...:-D But your works are good...keep up the quality..:-D
DeleteYeah I try all genres :-)
DeleteSo sad today! Tomorrow will he find himself? I hope so!
ReplyDeleteDeep and meaningful is so few words...thank you
ReplyDeleteThanks Siggi :-)
DeleteA sad lovestory in a nutshell
ReplyDeletePerhaps it can find a happier ending in future :-)
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