There is a place
Where I can go
A thousand moons
Wow, what a show.
There is a place
Where I can go
The stars will dance
Merry waves flow.
There is a place
Where I can go
A romantic proposal
She won't say no.
There is a place
Where I can go
The birds will sing
........ So?
There is a place
Where I can go
Am too sleepy
Will run to my burrow.
There is a place
Where I can go
Now running short of words
Forgive me friends , Ho Ho !!!
This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday.
Where I can go
A thousand moons
Wow, what a show.
There is a place
Where I can go
The stars will dance
Merry waves flow.
There is a place
Where I can go
A romantic proposal
She won't say no.
There is a place
Where I can go
The birds will sing
........ So?
There is a place
Where I can go
Am too sleepy
Will run to my burrow.
There is a place
Where I can go
Now running short of words
Forgive me friends , Ho Ho !!!
This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday.
Added a little humor. Nice.
ReplyDeleteAnd well written. :)
Didn't add anything ... way too sleepy :-P
DeleteLolz ...i started it as a poetry with depth and passion and solitude ....but it ended up givn me a smile :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I am glad it did :-)
Deletesmiling as always!
ReplyDeleteThank You my friend :-)
DeleteThis made me smile :)
ReplyDeleteAnd I smile back too :-)
Deletethe humor at the end made me smile...its nice to have that special place to go thought to get away...where the magic happens...
ReplyDeleteIndeed .... a perfect place :-)
DeleteLove it,,,,it made me smile too,,,a little taste of many things,,, :-)
ReplyDeleteAnd I love your comment :-)
DeleteThe last one made me laugh, good twist, Amrit!
ReplyDeletePerhaps my sleepiness served the purpose of making my friends laugh :-)
Deletehahaa..this one really defines the real you :P
ReplyDeleteReally? :P
DeleteI loved the last one....
ReplyDeleteThanks Satya :-)
DeleteHa that's quite fun at the end... Smiles...
ReplyDeleteThank You Sreeja :-)
DeleteThat was such a clever write up with a dose of humor in it.. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anisha :-)
DeleteThis is good and I like your sense of humor.
ReplyDeleteThank You Belva :-)
Delete:)
ReplyDeleteHo-ho to you! What a delightful romp!
ReplyDeleteThanks Keith :-)
Deletethere is a place I can go
ReplyDeletedelightful verses to read in a row :D
Loved it!!
Wow ... that rhymed :P
DeleteNice very very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks Whitesnake :-)
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