The little parts of life that you depict, portray your happiness in little things. Like you don't want the bigger chunks of money, but the little crumbs of love.Beautiful way of expressing.:)
Thanks Stuti :-)
Aaww...that is so cute...cute poetry...:)
These small stones are so beautiful! :)
Thanks Kiara :-)
And as you suggested, I also gave it a shot :)
Yes I read it, and it's beautiful :-)
Very sweet and tender,,,like it a lot,,,
very beautifully written ... loved visiting your blog too ...
lovely, the way express in so few words. This one is very thoughtful and sweet.
I didn't want to add -ly to soft as I felt it might make the word a bit heavier :-)
I will soon suffer from toothache with all the sweetness here. You have a knack for this type of expressions.
Ooops ... you can check my bitter poems too ;-)
That one short and yet so moving does speak about some awesome grasp on writing!
Thanks so much Jerly :-)
nice intimacy in this...i would def be smiling as well...
Thank You Brian :-)
the tenderness in this verse is truly heart-warming...it makes one go "Awwww"
Thanks Reshma :-)
This is beautiful! It made me smile. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Thank You Bo :-)
softly I smile at this whisper..
Keep smiling :-)
now, this is a sweet one. loved it!!
Thanks Deb :-)
The little parts of life that you depict, portray your happiness in little things.
ReplyDeleteLike you don't want the bigger chunks of money, but the little crumbs of love.
Beautiful way of expressing.
:)
Thanks Stuti :-)
DeleteAaww...that is so cute...cute poetry...:)
ReplyDeleteThese small stones are so beautiful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Kiara :-)
DeleteAnd as you suggested, I also gave it a shot :)
DeleteYes I read it, and it's beautiful :-)
DeleteVery sweet and tender,,,like it a lot,,,
ReplyDeletevery beautifully written ... loved visiting your blog too ...
ReplyDeletelovely, the way express in so few words. This one is very thoughtful and sweet.
ReplyDeleteI didn't want to add -ly to soft as I felt it might make the word a bit heavier :-)
ReplyDeleteI will soon suffer from toothache with all the sweetness here. You have a knack for this type of expressions.
ReplyDeleteOoops ... you can check my bitter poems too ;-)
DeleteThat one short and yet so moving does speak about some awesome grasp on writing!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Jerly :-)
Deletenice intimacy in this...i would def be smiling as well...
ReplyDeleteThank You Brian :-)
Deletethe tenderness in this verse is truly heart-warming...it makes one go "Awwww"
ReplyDeleteThanks Reshma :-)
DeleteThis is beautiful! It made me smile. Thanks for sharing it with us.
ReplyDeleteThank You Bo :-)
Deletesoftly I smile at this whisper..
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling :-)
Deletenow, this is a sweet one. loved it!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deb :-)
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