Monday, January 14, 2013

Naked Tear



Naked tear
Rid off your fear
The grief won't last
Don't dwell in the past
The present is right
Your future will be bright
The sun will shine
On the count of nine
Smoother road ahead
You crossed the thorny bed
Roses will bloom
Throw off this gloom
Uncover the new mile
With that red smile
The vision now clear
Let's not have any naked tear.


This Poem is shared with One Single Impression and the Prompt is Naked.





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29 comments:

  1. C.S.H1/15/2013 12:06:00 am

    very inspiring, simplistic and lovely and I heard the message, thank you.

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  2. Sadia Khan1/15/2013 12:15:00 am

    what a flow...loving it :)

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  3. Leovi1/15/2013 12:42:00 am

    Optimistic, brilliant and magical. Delicious poem.

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  4. Divya1/15/2013 01:41:00 am

    :) :) It's always good to have a positive attitude!

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  5. carol l mckenna1/15/2013 04:44:00 am

    Well written 'up beat' poetry ~

    (A Creative Harbor)

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  6. Sreeja1/15/2013 12:57:00 pm

    Full of positive things...loved this!

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  7. Woman'n'Beyond1/15/2013 01:15:00 pm

    simple, sweet, excellent!!

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  8. ^.^1/15/2013 03:07:00 pm

    I have been grieving my baby daughter's death for 27 years ... that's all I have left ... the memory of her sweet face ... and my grief. I will never grow and let go ... Your poem is sweet and soothing ... Thank you, Mr. G ... Love, cat.

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  9. Anonymous1/15/2013 03:13:00 pm

    as always a good one amrit ,kudos

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  10. WabiSabi1/15/2013 06:38:00 pm

    I like the optimism of wanting to 'uncover the new mile'

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  11. Scarlet1/15/2013 07:25:00 pm

    I like the uncovering the smile, everything passes like storm ~

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  12. Panchali1/15/2013 07:54:00 pm

    " Uncover the new mile
    With that red smile
    The vision now clear
    Let's not have any naked tear."---Wow! Beautiful and inspiring piece, Speck...Loved it!

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  13. Reshma1/15/2013 11:36:00 pm

    Wow that's a fantastic pep-up. Loved the image too.

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  14. Ellecee1/16/2013 05:33:00 am

    "Let's not have any naked tear", yes, yes. Wonderful rhythm and flow,,,,you are such a talented poet,,,

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  15. The Write Girl1/16/2013 06:47:00 am

    I love the image of the naked tear and every verse is uplifting and moving.

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  16. TCPC1/18/2013 11:52:00 am

    optimistic! loved it. nice rhyme!

    AKila

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