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revisit pages
scribbled with vigor of youth
learn to live again
learn to live again
dream castles under the sun
look at the mirror
look at the mirror
and you smile back at yourself
revisit pages
This Haiku is shared with Sensational Haiku Wednesday and the Prompt is Revisit.
smile is infectious, I am smiling too!
ReplyDeleteKeep smiling :-)
DeleteNostalgic bliss! Beautiful series of haiku! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Valli :-)
DeleteWonderful imagery... I thought you were with the Small Stones writers. I love haiku too. :-)
ReplyDeleteI've been writing my small stones on my blogspot blog.
http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-trust.html
Eliz
Thanks Eliz ... I just started writing small stones a few days ago :-) Thanks for visiting :-)
Deletelooking at the mirror and smiling at myself in a little while...as always your words brought a smile and gladness to this heart :)
ReplyDeleteI am glad it made you smile :-)
DeleteI do that often....thanks on building up the belief that i am not crazy to do so :P
ReplyDeleteI do it too ... helps me reduce stress :-)
DeleteI love this...beauty in retrospection.
ReplyDeleteThank You my friend :-)
DeleteThere is a lot to be gained by revisiting old pages, I think. Sometimes, even if they are one's own words, one finds new things there to savor......after a few years.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree ... old pages does help us walk towards a new life :-)
DeleteBeautifully written Haiku. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Ajay :-)
Deletenice reflections
ReplyDeleteThank You Unfettered :-)
DeleteSometimes a walk down the memory lane brings you face to face with the hidden you. Nicely crafted Haiku:)
ReplyDeleteVery nice. My favorite line is "dream castles under the sun".
ReplyDeleteThank You Kendall :-)
DeleteAn excellent trilogy. Liked the last best.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :-)
DeleteThis is the kind of revisiting I can get into!
ReplyDeleteSlow Death by Guinness
Revisiting is necessary at times :-)
DeleteWell done, Green Speck. I really love your set of Haiku or is it Naisaiku???
ReplyDeleteKudos my friend.
hugs
shakira
Thanks Shakira ... I have never attempted a Naisaiku, but I guess one of these days I might try it :-)
DeleteWonderful cascade, Green Speck
ReplyDeleteThanks Celestine :-)
Deletebut my mirror brings back my age, i'd rather just look at the pages...
ReplyDeletethoughtful haiku!
Ha ha ... thanks Tara :-)
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