Sunday, October 26, 2014

And I WIshed

42 comments:

  1. that is really so piquant and very stirring! loved it ! I just loveee your verses! keep writing :)

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  2. Sometimes that single missing hug made all the difference...

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  3. simple but strong poem with a great message for all relationships. good one :)

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  4. A hug and a smile and perhaps an apology would have changed things ~ Good one Amrit ~

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    1. I agree...an apology is always a good idea !

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    2. Thanks Grace and Rallentanda :-)

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  5. touch is an important aspect of relationships...a hug...a welcome smile...might have indeed made the difference....

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  6. Yes. A hug can make all the difference...

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  7. Groovy piece- without that hug what was there?

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  8. Time waits for no one, and that's how it is ... Love, cat.

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  9. ah....the what if's and the had you's! :)

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  10. Oh wow the last two lines!! You are amazing my friend! :)

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  11. 5th and 6th line says it all Amrit.
    Good one.

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  12. wonderful write.

    i get the nostalgic feeling of missing someone, of unspent time stolen.

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  13. I hate missed opportunities but I do like how you wrote this - brief but powerful. Well done.

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  14. in such simple words such strong feelings..:))

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  15. Love in very lovely lines Very nice,Amrit.

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  16. Yearning, in just a few lines. This connects to all.

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  17. Oh my. Worth a thought though.

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  18. wow its working...
    http://www.vashikaranprediction.com/vashikaran-mantra-for-love.html

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