Monday, January 14, 2013

Naked Tear



Naked tear
Rid off your fear
The grief won't last
Don't dwell in the past
The present is right
Your future will be bright
The sun will shine
On the count of nine
Smoother road ahead
You crossed the thorny bed
Roses will bloom
Throw off this gloom
Uncover the new mile
With that red smile
The vision now clear
Let's not have any naked tear.


This Poem is shared with One Single Impression and the Prompt is Naked.





32 comments:

  1. very inspiring, simplistic and lovely and I heard the message, thank you.

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  2. Optimistic, brilliant and magical. Delicious poem.

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  3. :) :) It's always good to have a positive attitude!

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  4. Well written 'up beat' poetry ~

    (A Creative Harbor)

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  5. Full of positive things...loved this!

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  6. I have been grieving my baby daughter's death for 27 years ... that's all I have left ... the memory of her sweet face ... and my grief. I will never grow and let go ... Your poem is sweet and soothing ... Thank you, Mr. G ... Love, cat.

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  7. as always a good one amrit ,kudos

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  8. I like the optimism of wanting to 'uncover the new mile'

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  9. I like the uncovering the smile, everything passes like storm ~

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  10. " Uncover the new mile
    With that red smile
    The vision now clear
    Let's not have any naked tear."---Wow! Beautiful and inspiring piece, Speck...Loved it!

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  11. Wow that's a fantastic pep-up. Loved the image too.

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  12. "Let's not have any naked tear", yes, yes. Wonderful rhythm and flow,,,,you are such a talented poet,,,

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  13. I love the image of the naked tear and every verse is uplifting and moving.

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  14. optimistic! loved it. nice rhyme!

    AKila

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