Monday, August 20, 2012

When Somebody Loves You

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When somebody loves you,
And you don't really have a clue,
Time to check, time to find,
The girl who's gonna be just your kind.

The princess of your dream,
Smilingly pleasant, proper and prim,
She waits for you at the evening show,
But alas, so ignorant, you hardly know.

She sways and moves,
Oh, a perfect dancer she proves,
Trying to gain that single attention,
But then, you completely deny the equation.

Burns her fingers in the oven,
While listening to music of the Beethoven,
Yet for you she brings those cakes,
Come on, now look at the efforts she makes.

Open your eyes, lift your ears,
See her words, listen to her tears,
Waiting for you, myriad days and nights,
Embrace her tight, free her of all these fights.

When somebody loves you,
And you don't really have a clue,
Time to check, time to find,
The girl who's gonna be just your kind.



This Poem is shared with Carry On Tuesday and the Prompt is When Somebody Loves You.





22 comments:

  1. Rhythmic as always :)
    Well, that's not easy to find out someone who loves you if such feelings does not comes from your side too.

    Lovely creation :)

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  2. Awwwww! How sweet.. what a sweet poem.. love is so wonderful!

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  3. Does your poet have a special fellow in mind, G.S?
    Those cakes might do the trick, I have heard the saying, "the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.

    Thanks for peeking in on my OSI. I will watch to see if you write a 'lopsided' poem.
    ..

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    1. There is no special fellow in mind ... every character in this poem is fictitious. Resemblance to any person living or dead is purely coincidental :-P

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  4. A wonderful poem, to be sure. You describe the experience so well....

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  5. Awwwwww......... That was sweeeeeeeeeet!!!!!!!!!

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  6. It's almost a plea to be seen. I hope they open their eyes and see what's right there before them. x

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  7. Lovely.......very lyrical.....you can hum.on.....

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  8. Ah, a secret admirer! Exciting!

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  9. How can anyone be so blind? Love is action, and this gal is acting like she loves!

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  10. Ahh.... when somebody loves you, it's the best feeling in the world :)
    Lovely poem.

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  11. Perhaps I should look over my shoulder now and again!

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