Green, envy echoes,
Whirlwind sweeps the shredded heart,
Doubt, lies and distrust.
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Safety belt in place,
Patience and Perseverance,
Green light signals, go.
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Go Green is the call,
Initiatives developed,
Now seeking results.
This Haiku is shared with Haiku Heights and the Prompt is Green.
Yes, I like, some excellent haiku, is gorgeous, very pretty.
ReplyDeletemy mind is too focused....I wish I had thought of these other takes on the prompt! great set - espec. the jealous lover
ReplyDeleteThank You Joanne :-)
DeleteI know some people who, when the green light signals go, just sit there!
ReplyDeleteNot a Wisp of Green
Probably they need to learn about traffic rules ;-)
DeleteNice set of haiku. I like them all, but especially the first.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting PattiKen :-)
DeleteBeautiful set of haiku! All three are lovely!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Valli :-)
DeletePretty cool, going green with envy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dark Angel :-)
DeleteAwesome set! You've improved a lot buddy in writing a Real haiku, if you don't mind me sayin it! try adding more natural elements to your work and see it shine brighter :)
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this immensely!
Peekaboo with the moon!
Thanks a lot Pranita for this encouragement :-)
DeleteGreen, jealousy, envy, spite. Very powerful haiku you have written here. Thank you for sharing Amrit!
ReplyDeleteThanks Crystal :-)
DeleteLovely Haiku :) really enjoyed reading this, Your great at poetry, Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteThank You Dana :-)
DeleteGreens touch on everyone, one and all! And you've nailed it for most in your haiku set.Wonderful write, Green!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :-)
DeleteThese are great. The first one especially speaks to me!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful perspectives on green! Love the associations in the first haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks Gemma :-)
DeleteAll varied and interesting. Liked the first one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rallentanda :-)
DeleteDid you mean these to be read separately or together? They work separately, but together they tell a very fine story with lovely changes in the meaning of green, from jealousy to GO! to a call to ecological cures. Truly the whirlwind would be able to do little to a heart in that new atmosphere, and the heart itself may be healed.
ReplyDeleteThanks for summarizing it so beautifully, Susan :-)
DeleteA beautiful string..." Doubt, lies and distrust."--says it all!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :-)
Deletea wonderful set of Haiku..though um new to this form of poetry but still i can feel the essence of it...
ReplyDeleteThank You friend !!!
Deleteso great... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jessica :-)
DeleteGreen from all angles. An excellent trio.
ReplyDeleteNice varied directions of green ... particularly like the first. Sizzling
ReplyDeleteThank You Becca :-)
DeleteI like Susan's comment on this one. The progression from fear to an open heart :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tigerbrite :-)
DeleteLike the set, specially the first one ~
ReplyDeleteThank You Grace :-)
DeleteThe first one is my fav.
ReplyDeleteYou chose green envy, I chose green jealousy.
I wrote about two ecologists.
No coincidence with the second one waiting to take off.
Green, for Hope, in your name, expecting good results.
:)
Welcome to my blog Dulcina :-)
Deletebeautiful haiku..
ReplyDeleteThanks Jayanth :-)
Deletevery well written .. First one is too good ...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Anu :-)
DeleteThanks Loredana :-)
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